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1092 views. 2011-2-16 13:01 |

Recently, our company  have a series of revesion.Some important document must change the edition into English,so here is a sentence in the document, i want urs help me,looking for some errors,let me correct it ,Thank u!
本测试报告属于XXXX有限公司与相关客户机密存档,请妥善保管,未经我司与相关客户许可,任何人

不得对外泄漏。

1.This test report belongs to XXXXXX.CO.LTD. and related clients to file, please keeping it properly, without our company  and related clients allowed, anybody has no rights to reveal it to public.

Another one,I don't which one will be better:

This testing report is confidential document,without the authorization of XXX and related customer,no one may disclose it for the business purpose(includes thr potential business purpose,the same hereinafter)

Post comment Comment (8 replies)

Reply sunnyv 2011-2-16 14:47
Unfortunately, I don't know Chinese but I will try my best to help....

(Amended) 1.This test report belongs to XXXXXX.CO.LTD. and related clients. You are request to please keep it properly and securely. The contents may not be revealed to the public without the prior written approval of our company and related clients. Your co-operation would be appreciated.

(Rewritten) This preliminary report is the property of XXXXXX Co. Ltd. This report is confidential and you are respectfully requested to retain it safely and securely. The contents of this report may not be disclosed to the public or any party without our prior written appoval. Your co-operation would be appreciated.
Reply nail 2011-2-16 14:50
Thank u for ur help ,
Reply Tange 2011-2-16 20:45
sunnyv: Unfortunately, I don't know Chinese but I will try my best to help....

(Amended) 1.This test report belongs to XXXXXX.CO.LTD. and related clients. Yo
i prefer to the 2nd translation ;  it is quite formally ..
hi sunny , your chinese is well enough now . can fully understand those words  ; hehe
Reply sunnyv 2011-2-16 22:21
Hey Tange, thanks for your endorsement of this translation. I got to improve my written Chinese or can't survive. You got my email?
Reply nail 2011-2-17 13:02
no,i don't have your email
Reply nail 2011-2-17 13:02
Do u have the QQ?
Reply sedgehead 2011-2-18 04:42
This test report is confidential.  It belongs to Xyz Co., Ltd. and should be maintained in a secure location.  The contents should not be revealed without first gaining permission of both the client and the appropriate company official.
Reply nail 2011-2-18 13:18
Thanks,hehe

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