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a poem about refuse

1218 views. 2010-4-3 18:12 |

my teacher required us to write a poem with certain ambic,rhyme and syllable. the poem is about refuse love. we have to use our imagnation, and wirte a poem to refuse one who show his admiration to you. after 3 days consideration, i finnally finish it. it is really a tragedy to my to write a poem....and i really hope there is one who can help me with it or give me some advise.

The flowers are blooming on their ground

With wonderful colours that could be found.

But all of them will finally fade

As calendar run to the end of May.

 

As beauties always fade away fast,

Romantic stories are hardly last;

It suddenly come here, suddenly lay;

Love is not (a thing) for who can pray.

 

Our life is earnest and time is fleeting

Meaningful targets are waiting for seeking

Do not indulge yourself with love

And loss the success that ought to achieve

 

Regret me that I can’t accept your heart

Though you are so handsome and pretty smart

What I want isn’t a branch of flower

But a real man who have his own power.


Post comment Comment (15 replies)

Reply Sharer 2010-4-3 20:49
If were the man who  received your letter. I won't live over tonight!It's so heart-broken.
Reply bonnie8934 2010-4-3 22:28
Sharer: If were the man who  received your letter. I won't live over tonight!It's so heart-broken.
oh~~i am sorry, but i think actually nobody will show his love on me ~
Reply Sharer 2010-4-3 22:33
bonnie8934: oh~~i am sorry, but i think actually nobody will show his love on me ~
He~No I can't believe it. You are so talented.
Reply The-Simple-Life 2010-4-3 23:20
you major in English? It's so great
Reply ly.identity 2010-4-4 09:19
Wow~~ I deeply admire people who can write poem!!!
"As calendar run to the end of May", I like this sentence~
Reply Cilla 2010-4-4 11:41
How hard it is to write a poem in iambic pentameter. How talented you are.
Reply bonnie8934 2010-4-4 12:03
The-Simple-Life: you major in English? It's so great
yes, indeed i major in english literaure~~what about you?
Reply bonnie8934 2010-4-4 12:05
Cilla: How hard it is to write a poem in iambic pentameter. How talented you are.
thanks for your appreciation~~you are so sweet~~
Reply bonnie8934 2010-4-4 12:07
ly.identity: Wow~~ I deeply admire people who can write poem!!!
"As calendar run to the end of May", I like this sentence~
thanks~ i will try to write more~~maybe next time i will be asked to write a poem that show love to someone~~
Reply ly.identity 2010-4-4 12:26
bonnie8934: thanks~i will try to write more~~maybe next time i will be asked to write a poem that show love to someone~~
Hey, that's an interesting topic~ I'm looking forward to it~
Reply The-Simple-Life 2010-4-4 17:51
Labour and Social Security. it is said to be promising,but i really worry about my future.
Reply MrVan 2010-4-5 07:30
the freestyle elements breach the structure but thats what makes it fun...curious the idea that relationship will thwart you...you want to be free
Reply bonnie8934 2010-4-7 16:30
The-Simple-Life: Labour and Social Security. it is said to be promising,but i really worry about my future.
me too, but take it easy, everything has its own way~~what we have to do is to try our best to find our dream~and keep it till the last mimute~
Reply bonnie8934 2010-4-7 16:31
MrVan: the freestyle elements breach the structure but thats what makes it fun...curious the idea that relationship will thwart you...you want to be free
truth, relationship to me is a trouble matter. maybe i have endured to much before~now what i desire is to be myself~~
Reply MrVan 2010-4-8 09:43
re: Being yourself...just look in the mirror...surprise!  It's you.

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