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Sights of a Sunset [日没吟] Part I

2800 views. 2011-10-27 13:42 |Individual Classification:Log

The following is a rework of lovingfun's "Causerie". This is the part one. You can see the original HEREIt shocked me when I saw our man lovingfun's "Causerie" the first time. The picture it depicts is striking. So I asked for his permission to reinterpret it into poetry, and he so graciously complied.

  以下是 lovingfun  同学作品的一个重制,这是第一部分。原作品请点击 这里lovingfun 同学的这篇随笔让我很有感触,在征得他同意的前提下,我将其改为诗歌。拙笔希墨,可能有点面目全非,权当活跃一下气氛。










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Reply S_Xlove 2011-10-27 14:24
wow ..what's a beautiful and peaceful quiet landscape of sunset !the picture is just presented from this poetry. The poet is surely got holding by this peaceful scence,and unconsciously , a kind of loss fills into bosom ,which probably is a series of life experience ,probably is a section of memery ,probably is a beloved person .while ,all of this have gone with wind , just keep the peaceful mind .and taste the special sunset.
Reply ringcao 2011-10-27 14:35
Wow!Beautiful poem, beautiful handwriting.Is there the third poem in another handwriting?
Reply lijuanandrea 2011-10-27 14:59
beautiful hand writing
Reply IMNONARCISSUS 2011-10-27 19:08
A  nice poem.
Reply snowflying 2011-10-27 19:14
wow, wonderful enough! nice enough! beautiful enough! you really a enough guy! tea...
Reply Aure@ 2011-10-27 21:00
Reply 异物 2011-10-27 21:20
Aure@:
Reply 异物 2011-10-27 21:21
snowflying: wow, wonderful enough! nice enough! beautiful enough! you really a enough guy! tea...
Enough is enough.
Reply 异物 2011-10-27 21:21
IMNONARCISSUS: A  nice poem.
Thank you.
Reply 异物 2011-10-27 21:22
lijuanandrea: beautiful hand writing
Reply 异物 2011-10-27 21:23
ringcao: Wow!Beautiful poem, beautiful handwriting.Is there the third poem in another handwriting?
Only one, but three parts.
Reply 异物 2011-10-27 21:24
S_Xlove: wow ..what's a beautiful and peaceful quiet landscape of sunset !the picture is just presented from this poetry. The poet is surely got holding by this
Glad you like it.
Reply bluephoebe 2011-10-27 23:29
I remembered his blog and I like it. Yours is great, a bit make me wanna cry. sorry, it's a long day. i just
Reply love_is_circle 2011-10-28 08:48
One special blog I ever read.
Reply welljan 2011-10-28 09:52
perfect!!!!!!!!
Reply 异物 2011-10-28 11:31
welljan: perfect!!!!!!!!
I suppose you mean "far from", perfect.
Reply lovingfun 2011-10-28 12:26
Bravo,  much better than me. If possible, could u teach me how to do that?
Reply 异物 2011-10-28 19:48
love_is_circle: One special blog I ever read.
Reply 异物 2011-10-28 22:13
bluephoebe: I remembered his blog and I like it. Yours is great, a bit make me wanna cry. sorry, it's a long day. i just
How's your friend doing? I mean the girl in your Wordless.
Reply 异物 2011-10-28 22:28
lovingfun: Bravo,  much better than me. If possible, could u teach me how to do that?
Sadly, I'm not a teacher. I am lousy enough to not be able to be even a wannabe teacher. Look at my last sentence, It's sick and twisted, yet grammatically correct. It is a good example of why I suck at teaching.

With that said, we still can learn from each other through our constant interactions on this site. We're in this together. So let's do it!
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