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what my grandfather said to me

848 views. 2012-1-24 22:16

today is the second year of the new year and as usual my parenets and i went to my grandfather to eat meal which is called to see the gold off.we went there with five crabs and two Pitayas which my grandmother prefer to.after the meal,we were talking something about the future.and my grandfather said to me that no cross,no crown and there are gold within books and there are beauties as fair as jade.he repeated his words once again and i think that his words is just like an injection for me because i think i am so tired and do not want to study these days.well tonight ,i begin to study.

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Reply lvshu 2012-1-25 00:10
Sometimes we do need encouragement or criticism from families, which can lead to our greater success.
Reply sedgehead 2012-1-25 09:41
Suggestions to improve your use of English (note the changes):
Today is the second day . . . parents and I went to visit my grandfather to eat a meal. . . . We went . . . grandmother prefers. After the meal, we were talking a while about the future. My grandfather . . . that if you have no cross, no crown . . . jade. He repeated . . .  and I think . . . to study very much these days. Well tonight, I begin to study.

Note: use a space after a period or comma (not before).  Look in any book for examples.  Use a capital letter to start a sentence.
Reply Noyu 2012-1-25 16:39
sedgehead: Suggestions to improve your use of English (note the changes):
Today is the second day . . . parents and I went to visit my grandfather to eat a meal.
Thank you very much!I am a little lazy to change the letter into a capital one, heheh.Your suggestion is useful for me and I am gald to see your suggestion.Thank you again.
Reply Noyu 2012-1-25 16:41
lvshu: Sometimes we do need encouragement or criticism from families, which can lead to our greater success.
you are quite right!especially for the ones like me who are forgetable.
Reply sedgehead 2012-1-26 04:52
Noyu: Thank you very much!I am a little lazy to change the letter into a capital one, heheh.Your suggestion is useful for me and I am gald to see your sugge
glad!  (not gald)

Cool!
Reply WHT.AND.BLK 2012-2-14 22:39
I read your blog but i don't know what the words "no cross,no crown" means. can you explain for me?
Reply Noyu 2012-4-29 16:45
WHT.AND.BLK: I read your blog but i don't know what the words "no cross,no crown" means. can you explain for me?
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