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A Letter Sent

Hot 2780 views. 2014-8-23 20:16 |Individual Classification:Reflection

Seeing through the darkness and the misty rain

I turn on the light.

A sentence I write

"The moon is beautiful tonight."


我望穿了下雨的夜

拧开台灯

在纸上告诉你

“今晚的月色真美。”

 

The ancient city sleeps deep in drunk.

Following the nib, a shadow wanders.

A bottle of plum win I had

Reaching now only half of the glass.


古城微醺

笔尖,影子在纸上游走

我有一瓶乌梅酒

还剩小半杯

 

Not one raindrop touches road of the past.

My hair is dripping still.

Blurred words on the paper

I wander if you could behold.


湿漉漉的雨打不到青石板

发稍还在滴水

洇散后

字模糊了,怕你看不出

 

Twice I fold the letter, and then a third.

On the newly bought envelope I write

The name of the receiver it is

Only to remember that I forgot

To ask you sweet name.


折笺三次

在新买来的信封上落笔

我写下寄信人

才想起要问

“你是谁?”

Post comment Comment (7 replies)

Reply xingyue 2014-8-23 23:37
It seems to be more silence and quiet in a rain night, and people more sentimental with the sounds of the rain. Appreciating the mood and feeling created by the words, I think there is a kind of slight loneliness.
Reply laurendong 2014-8-24 10:00
xingyue: It seems to be more silence and quiet in a rain night, and people more sentimental with the sounds of the rain. Appreciating the mood and feeling crea ...
Yes, it was a rainy night when I wrote this...and it was indeed loneliness I was feeling. It's good to have someone who understand:)
Thanks for replying!
Best,
Lauren
Reply xingyue 2014-8-24 15:41
laurendong: Yes, it was a rainy night when I wrote this...and it was indeed loneliness I was feeling. It's good to have someone who understand:)
Thanks for replyi ...
My pleasure.
Reply ivyren 2014-8-25 20:41
I guess you want to express the loneliness that can't be understood by other people. And I think you enjoy such loneliness. Maybe it's contradictory. Sometimes we need someone to feel what we feel and talk with. But we also enjoy this quiet and let the thoughts flows in our mind, and that's beyond words.  You have created a beautiful poem.
Reply laurendong 2014-8-25 23:03
ivyren: I guess you want to express the loneliness that can't be understood by other people. And I think you enjoy such loneliness. Maybe it's contradictory.  ...
You are right with what you are guessing there.
As for solitude itself, I cannot tell if it's good or bad. Lots of damages have been done....but a lot more gained. I would not be the way I am if it weren't for being alone, and I like it. But I'm growing to be terrified of people to some degree, and that's not what I intended to. I'm trying to work it out.
Thank you for your kind compliments. I didn't expect you would all be so tolerant. Thrilled with happiness now XD
Best,
Lauren
Reply ivyren 2014-8-26 11:16
I have the same feelings.  And i think  we will change more or less after experiencing somethings. Enjoy being alone, and it's really valuable.
Reply laurendong 2014-8-26 20:18
ivyren: I have the same feelings.  And i think  we will change more or less after experiencing somethings. Enjoy being alone, and it's really valuable.
Right back at ya:)

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