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740 views. 2009-12-25 22:13

My dear friends, I really need your help!

There’s an application form for me to filled in, something like an English resume. And in the “open question area” of the form, it is described as follows:

“What was the top one or two major actions that you took in the past 12 months in order to develop yourself? How did you identify the area(s) for improvement? What feedback did you receive? Please give specific example.” (more than 3000 characters, please give your answer in English.)

Problems are that I haven’t written such a long article in English up to 3000 characters, and I just don’t know which topic I should take. Maybe I can talk something about the sports action I took in the past 12 months in order to develop my health? But how can I write 3000 characters about that? What’s your suggestion? Please, give me some ideas, I will really appreciate it!

Post comment Comment (14 replies)

Reply Samaritan 2009-12-26 06:50
search it online
Reply Miranda 2009-12-26 08:43
Samaritan: search it online
I'll try, thank you!
Reply charry 2009-12-26 09:13
It is really a tough work.
Reply Cherryhuang 2009-12-26 09:27
Maybe you can talk about the activities you take part in the Student Union and what you get from these activities...
Reply woods 2009-12-26 11:15
Over three thousand words~it's a big projection.They want the major actions,Maybe you could tell them something about your MAJOR in shool.Such as the developing direction of your major,the enthusiasm of your academia,the experiment you're working on with.In that case I think you might get millions of words to allege
Reply Miranda 2009-12-26 12:42
charry: It is really a tough work.
hehe, I think so!
Reply Miranda 2009-12-26 12:49
Cherryhuang: Maybe you can talk about the activities you take part in the Student Union and what you get from these activities...
Yeah, that's a good idea, but it's two years ago that I being in the student union, not happened in the past 12 months. Maybe I should choose some other topic, thank you all the same!
Reply Miranda 2009-12-26 12:54
woods: Over three thousand words~it's a big projection.They want the major actions,Maybe you could tell them something about your MAJOR in shool.Such as the
Yeah, you enlighten me, maybe I'll write some difficulties I have overcome during my experiment. Thank you very much, you really do me a great favor!
Reply minyingtao 2009-12-26 14:23
It is a hard work
Reply Miranda 2009-12-26 15:10
minyingtao: It is a hard work
Sure it is!
Reply Milan_Walk 2010-1-1 10:17
Hello, nice to meet you.
Were I were you, I will write it in Chinese first and then translate it into English. I think it will be better if you do it in this way.
And when you need to write an article which up to lots of words ,I suggest that you should write down your real feelings.
Because when you are writing your heart into paper it seems that you can't stop writing once you begain.
Reply Miranda 2010-1-1 17:52
Yes, you are right, thank you for your suggestion!
Reply colin0126 2010-1-6 07:34
Do an analyse about the major ,about yourself,about the advantages,about the future,about what you really want to do ,about what you lock of,about your idea to improve,about the foresee you want.
Reply Miranda 2010-1-6 09:32
colin0126: Do an analyse about the major ,about yourself,about the advantages,about the future,about what you really want to do ,about what you lock of,about you
Thank you for you suggestion.

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