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An awful thing !

521 views. 2009-10-1 18:15 |Individual Classification:Living Space|

        We had a chat  with my friend this afternoon. We  chat some topics about  life and her family members ! The details of our talk are as  follows :
        (Explanation: 'A'  delegates me , 'B' delegates my friend.)
      
        A:Did you teleview the National Day's dress parade  in the  morning?
        B:No, I was sleeping ! I went to sleep too late  yasterday .
        A:Aha, it's so regretful ! The dress parade is very wonderful ! I think you like it if you teleview it .
        B:I'm sorry ! It's so regretful !  Where are you going to  at night ?
        A:No ,I will sit down in my dormitory televiewing  National Day's soiree. Do you ?
        B:My several friends  invite me to  look  salute  in  suburban .
        A:It's so beautiful plan ! You should go with them .
        B:I'd like to go ,but my family in trouble ! I haven't the mood to play.
        A:What? Don't worry!
        B:I received  message about my family member maybe infect the virus H1N1. I'm very  afraid of my family!
        A:I'm sorry to listen it. I hope you be ok!  I think you need to validate it's true or not .
        B:I knowed the awful thing from my hometown.  I really don't know  what do I can do ?
        A:I think you  only  pray for your family members!  Don't worry too serious about it ! I think your family is OK , because of the bacterin of the virus H1N1  already producted by our country .
        B:I think so ! Thanks for your attention !
 
       The virus H1N1 is very serious in our country . The people  is afraid of  nothing but  illness and death .  I hope my friend's family members are OK!  At the same time , I hope my family and my friends are  healthly  and happy too !  Let our to strive with the virus !!!

Post comment Comment (11 replies)

Reply zolamoi 2009-10-1 19:21
the content of this dialogue is very good, but the expressions can be better.
Reply aganar 2009-10-1 19:37
zolamoi: the content of this dialogue is very good, but the expressions can be better.
Thinks for your advice !  I hope you can help me  update my topic ,because of my english is very poor !
Reply zolamoi 2009-10-1 19:56
aganar: Thinks for your advice !  I hope you can help me  update my topic ,because of my english is very poor !
at first, the tense is not correct. "we had a chat this afternoon". then, "The follow is our chat register:" ----"the details of our talk are as follows: "     "went go sleep" should be "went to sleep"       "at yasterday " should be "yesterday" ........   anyway, you are trying your best, that's very valuable. i admire you !
Reply DreamWalker 2009-10-1 20:37
Don't be afraid of the H1N1.As far as I know most people who infected by H1N1 are not severe. And most of them can recover soon. All we have to do is to do more exercises to make ourselves stronger,and but not to afraid of it. Keeping enough sleep is another important aspect to protect yourselves.
Hope your friends families be healthy!
Reply aganar 2009-10-1 21:54
DreamWalker: Don't be afraid of the H1N1.As far as I know most people who infected by H1N1 are not severe. And most of them can recover soon. All we have to do is
Thinks for your console !
I think my friend's families be healthy!
Reply aganar 2009-10-1 22:04
zolamoi: at first, the tense is not correct. "we had a chat this afternoon". then, "The follow is our chat register:" ----"the details
Thinks for your advice !
I already updated my blog .
Reply zolamoi 2009-10-6 22:00
aganar: Thinks for your advice !
I already updated my blog .
much better. and i hope we can study from each other. your diligence is so impressive.
Reply aganar 2009-10-6 22:25
zolamoi: much better. and i hope we can study from each other. your diligence is so impressive.
Thank ffor your praise.
It's my pleasure getting your help and directions!
Reply zolamoi 2009-10-9 22:49
aganar: Thank ffor your praise.
It's my pleasure getting your help and directions!
you flatter me.  i have no qualification to direct you.
Reply aganar 2009-10-9 22:55
zolamoi: you flatter me.  i have no qualification to direct you.
I hope we can go ahead together !
Reply zolamoi 2009-10-9 23:05
aganar: I hope we can go ahead together !
that's a sure thing.

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