Today my friend write a composition to practice cet6,i wanna someone helps to correct the composition.
Working in a large modern city
In recent years,it becames more and more difficult to find a stasified job.in spite of this,but most graduated students still want to have a good job in a large city.
The reasons as follows:in the first place,in their opinion,if they work in a large modern city,they will gain more oppotunities to show themselves as possible as they can.The next,all of the youth like to persue the new things,obviously,if they work in a large modern city,their dream will come true.
Although there are so many advantages for graduates to work in a large modern city.
However, there are some others,who hold the opposite views to this topic.They think comparated with working in a large modern city,they prefer to work in a small city also canimprove the personal abilties, the most important is that there has a quiet and peaceful circumstance if we work in a small city.
As far as my concerned,i don't think it's very good for every graduates to work in a small city.Everyone is unique ,so,u can choose the best way to shoe yourself.it's up to u.