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IELTS Example Answers----For my students(1)

574 views. 2011-11-3 13:06

很多学生说网上给出的雅思口语范文华而不实,我也有同感,去百度文库搜索了几个环球的参考答案,写的像是维基百科一样。。ORZ。。。

以下是两篇本人自己写的原稿,以后有时间就写写,主要为给我的学生们参考下其中的结构以及语言,内容上面的逻辑组织。

口语不是写作,不要求你有多华丽。自然,流利是考官极其看重的。词汇上有那么几个显著的好词就够了。提前准备口语稿是很重要的,但并不是要背下来,关键是熟悉故事内容,结构以及逻辑。

A place near a lot of water that you enjoyed visiting

Well, I had a hilarious time visiting the Opera House in Sydney on my first travel there. Opera house had always been my favorite architecture and I dreamed about it even when I was a kid. The opera house is situated right beside the famous darling harbor from where you can have a bird’s –eye view on the ocean which embraces half of the city. I had that trip only a few weeks after my arrival in Sydney with a close friend I just met there. I was quite homesick and was in a transition period through the culture shocks, I suppose that’s why I decided to take a time-out from my study and simply to relax myself. We took lots of photos of fantastic views around there, including a photo with myself standing on a cruise boat. There was a group of people playing some kind of music, I didn’t quite understand the music they were playing but it felt very peaceful. I guess the major reason I enjoyed the place is really that the ocean view can bring me sort of serenity and ease my mind so I could be taken away from the homesickness even just for a while.

 

A building of school

The building that I am going to describe is the fisher library in our university. Fisher library is known as the largest library in Australia and also the entire southern hemisphere. It has enjoyed a profound history almost as long as the university’s foundation. The library is located in front of the main entrance of our school with other school buildings centered around. The fisher library contains five storeys which are equipped with modern technological facilities spanning from Wi-Fi access to multimedia study room. There are also printing and photocopying, self-helping book inquiry desks, etc catered for students. I especially favored the library for the following reasons: first, the fisher library provides students with great convenience in meeting up for study purposes, with only a five-minute walk, we can easily transport ourselves from the main teaching buildings to the library, also the spacious study room in the library is perfect for a discussion or brainstorming. Second, while the internet completes libraries, it does not replace them, for not everything that we look for is digitalized.

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