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Listen to me to introduce my house again.
I have a large living room.
There is a television in the room.
It is beside in stereo.
There are near the wall in the East.
There is a sofa in the room.
The Sofa is red.
It is near the wall in the West.
There is a table in the middle of the room.
There are some magazines on the table.
There are some cups on the table.
A half water in the cup.
And there is a baby bed in the room.
It is near the stairway in the South.
Please come beside room.
This is a kitchen.
And this is my family dinner room.
There is a cooker near around the wall.
And there is a refrigerator in the room.
It is near the wall in the East.
There is a table in the middle of the room.
We are usually eats dinner on the table.
I come from Bo yang Jiang xi province.
It is a beautiful city.
The air is very good. And the weather always wet.
But I often live Beijing.
I don’t like Beijing.
The weather is not good.
It is very cold every day.
And the air is untidy.
The Beijing often has windy.
So I hate here.
I must spend a lot of money for my face.
But, this is no effect.
Now is near the New Year.
I think, I need have a shopping list.
Ah, this is a nice time that on the shopping time.
Post comment Comment (2 replies)
- Reply moli
- Your sentences: But I often live Beijing./The Beijing often has windy.
Mine: But I often live in Beijing./It is windy in Beijing.
- Reply sedgehead
- Thanks for your notes! Here's a few comments as well as thoughts on English:
You wrote: >>Listen to me to introduce my house again.
I suggest: Please let me tell you about my house again.
>>I have a large living room.
Great English! I can't comment on everything! HA!
>>There is a sofa in the room. The Sofa is red. It is near the wall in the West.
There is a red sofa in the room near the west wall.
>>There is a table in the middle of the room. There are some magazines on the table. There are some cups on the table.
The table in the middle of the room has some magazines and cups on it.
>>A half water in the cup.
The cup is half full.
OR
The cup is half empty.
There's a famous saying. Optimists say the cup is half full while pessimists say it is half empty!
>>And there is a baby bed in the room. It is near the stairway in the South.
"And" is not a good way to start a formal sentence, such as when writing a letter. The directions such as "south" are not capitalized. I suggest: There is a baby bed in the room near the stairway on the south wall.
>>Please come beside room.
Please come inside.
>>This is a kitchen.
I'd say "the kitchen" since there is only one.
>>And this is my family dinner room.
dining room
>>There is a cooker near around the wall.
stove
>>We are usually eats dinner on the table.
"We . . . eat . . ."
>>I come from Bo yang Jiang xi province.
Bo Yang, in Jiang Xi. Example: We live in Mountain Home, Arkansas. It is a beautiful city.
>>But I often live Beijing. And the air is untidy.
You can live in two places, usually seasonally. We would probably say "But sometimes I stay in Beijing." This means it is not our home but we often visit or work there.
>>The Beijing often has windy.
"is often windy"
>>So I hate here.
Either "So I hate the weather there" or "So I hate staying there."
>>Now is near the New Year.
Now it is close to New Years Day.
>>I think, I need have a shopping list.
"need to make a"
I will take the challenge you have given me and try to write a similar blog in Chinese. Look for it soon. I have a major problem. I don't know many Chinese words like couch, table, etc. So I will use mostly words I know. You can help me improve my use of Chinese! HA!
