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August 10, 2010: cooked lasagna with some uncooked lasagna noodles so you can see them!!!
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- Reply sedgehead
- acotang: what's this? I haven't ever seen it...heheThat's why I started posting notes about what we eat! Sheila wants some good Chinese recipes. Do you have any? We call this dish "lasagna."
- Reply acotang
- Wo...it is interesting to cook. But the foods that I have cooked were not delicious. I am studying now..haha...My friends love the Western-style food very much, we often try to do it, the result is not fine...study for you...
- Reply gaopengtao1
- you can watch some books about chinese food.I am glad to give some advices.
- Reply sedgehead
- gaopengtao1: you can watch some books about chinese food.I am glad to give some advices.Better English: You can read some books about Chinese food. I am glad to give you some advice.
I have made six changes. Can you find them? After you find them, compare what you find to the list below.
Check for changes first, then look below!
Ha!
Keep checking.
Then look below.
Here's the reasons for the changes.
1) Start each sentence with a capital letter.
2) We don't watch books. That's just a difference in wording between English and Chinese.
3) Proper nouns should have the first letter capitalized.
4) Use a space after a period or comma.
5) I've added the word "you" in a natural location but it is not necessary in this context.
6) Some words never end in "s." For example, we say "stuff" or "furniture" but we never say "stuffs" or "furnitures."
- Reply gaopengtao1
- Thank you.
- Reply gaopengtao1
- Thank you very much.
- Reply sedgehead
- kinzhang: is this pickle???or else?Yes, I cooked the noodles, heated the sauce, and mixed it all together. There are no pickles in it.
is it be done by yourself?
- Reply sedgehead
- Liph: It looks like that you are a gastrosoph about food.Probably so, but I never heard the word gastrosoph before!
- Reply Liph
- sorry, my English is poor.I don't know the word how i should express it.that's means that you are a person love delicious food.according to gastrosoph,before i also hadn't heard it.only i found it from internet.
- Reply sedgehead
- Liph: sorry, my English is poor.I don't know the word how i should express it.that's means that you are a person love delicious food.according to gastrosoph很好。我也常常用电脑的翻译。我的中文也不好。我建议： "Sorry, . . . poor. I don't . . . I . . . it. That means . . . .food. According . . . I. . . .it. Only I . . . ." That is, use a space after punctuation. Also use I and not i.
