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When we are little child, we can't figure out what the age mean to us. When we get older, our minds become much different from before, it changes gradually. Sometimes we can't realise it, but it actually affect our life and work. I want to share my views about age with my friends on this website. Firstly, I think age can make us perfect, it will influences every aspects of our life, it will affect our minds, our feelings will become much sensitive, our thoughts will become much quicker, our horizen will become much wider. Everyday is different, everday we are facing many difficulties, we are constantly practise our ability. Secondly, our roles have been changed, we are going to become men or women, but not always little kids. We should take much more responsibilities. We should make choices of our own.
I hope your guys can point out the mistakes on my writting. Thanks!
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- Reply hirondelle
- When I am old, I will travel around the world with my husband, and sometimes my children will come to see us with their children----that's the true bless of life.
- Reply carolyayayaya
- 1. When we are （were） little child（children）
2. it will influences（influence） every aspects of our life”
3. we are constantly practise our ability （abilities）
You can find it by yourself if you had a check after writing it as these mistakes are only basic ones. Keep writing, good luck!
- Reply DioScofield
- Forgive me, how old are you?
- Reply Jane11
- carolyayayaya: 1. When we are （were） little child（children）You are a good teacher !
2. it will influences（influence） every aspects of our life”
3. we are constantly practise our ability （abiliti
