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TO BE CALM

553 views. 2010-8-14 17:31 |

To be calm is very important for our living, studdying and working. I always ask myself to be claim, and I think I have done it well.
However,  I really can't control myself this time. I felt very angery and wanted to kill the bad guy .
I had been a home teacher this summer holiday. I needed to teach a boy with his Math and English. But no matter what and how I asked him do, he didn't do it. What was worse, he like lying his parents. For those reasons, I felt so tired and don't know what can I do to change the condition.
Under this kind of conditiion , I can't be calm, I wanted to kill him but I can't. Sometimes I felt I would be die, but nothing I can do.
TO BE CALM ISN'T AN EASY THING!

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Reply sedgehead 2010-8-16 11:10
Comments and English hints:

1) calm and claim (look up the definitions)

2) living,studdying and working.
studying

3) I always ask myself to be claim,and I think I have done it well.
Good English (except for the mispelled word).

4) However, I really can't control myself this time.I felt very angery and wanted to kill the bad guy .
I'll write more below!  Remember: use a space after a period.

5)I had been a home teacher this summer holiday.I needed to teach a boy with his Math and English.
My wife taught our children at home until they were ten years old.  But that was a long time ago.  

6) But no matter what and how I asked him do,he didn't do it.What was worse,he like lying his parents.For those reasons,I felt so tired and don't know what can I do to change the condition.
Unfortunately, parents too often accept the lies of their children.  It makes a teacher's life difficult.  Remember: use a space after a comma or period!

7) Under this kind of conditiion ,I can't be claim,I wanted to kill him but I can't.Sometimes I felt I would be die,but nothing I can do.
Oh, I totally agree!  You have to be calm, you can't kill the kid, and it is very frustrating.  I don't have a good answer.
Reply albeebe 2010-8-16 14:02
Thank you for your suggestions .It is difficult for me , but I just need to do my best,right? I can't forse anybody‘s hand.
Reply qintao 2010-8-26 08:20
Reply liaoxiaoyan 2010-9-14 10:59
dear, i make some suggestion for u, first, the grammar is not perfect. tense is mismatched. home teacher can be called as tutor. second, it is good start to improve your English if you continue to write your feeling down in English. for my own experience, to hold a good character as a tutor is of the most importance .
Reply albeebe 2010-9-14 21:18
Thank you for your suggestions,I think I will continue to write,because I want to laern English very very well!

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