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Xia Men Ya Shi Oil Painting Company is located in Xia Men ,a beautiful port city of China which is full of romance and have a world –class art environment.Our company specilalizes in copying and creating paintings. Over the years, under the principle of ‘high quality,keeping reputation’  our products are sold in European; Southeast Asia; mainland China and win warm praise from customers all over the world.

We have more than 200 excelent professional painters,and cope with painters of various themes and various class.We are able to produce various canvas in mass production,with an monthly output of more than two thousand paintings.Our products are made with the best canvas and pigment artificially. in order to achieve the maximum effect of three-dimensional adornment for the product  ,the painting are mounted with more than four centimeters thickness of wooden picture frame.All of our product are inspected by Full-time inspection,thus we can make sure of making and delivering the goods timely.No matter retail or wholesale we can meet all of your request,and make a concession on price to our customers.Ya Shi Oil Painting welcome customers through out the world sincerely to our company to negotiate the business,and hope to creat glory with our customers hand in hand.

main business

Our main business is to supply wall decoration and Canvas rendering services to Art dealers ,Gallery, family, Hotel, Office, Gifts company, Adornment company Etc.We  process and wholesale various topics and specifications of the painting for foreign trade company at the same time.

Service scope:

We accept all subjects,such as Classic characters, scenery, adornment, Abstract painting, Impression painting,still objects ,Flowers, Animals, The street, Mediterranean,, waves, Sailing, terminal, Venice, Snow, Quan Yin, Buddha , Famous replication ,Guest-greeting pine, The Great Wall, Crane ta-ste, 9 the carp, 8 horse, Personal portrait, pre-wedding photos Ect.Meanwhile,we can design paintings according to your favorite style.

Post comment Comment (25 replies)

Reply bluebird 2010-7-2 16:14
I can merely make suggestions on some little things:
1. "has a world –class...", not "have".
2. "good reputation" is better than "keeping reputation".
3. "sold to Europe" is better than "sold in European'.
4. It's "various classes".
5. The sentence "Ya Shi Oil Painting welcome customers through out the world sincerely to our company to negotiate the business,and hope..." It's more suitable to say "Worldwide customers are welcome to our Ya Shi Oil Painting Company for business and we hope to..."
6. Use "1,2,3..." Not "一,二,三..."
Reply 2amlittle 2010-7-2 16:31
bluebird: I can merely make suggestions on some little things:
1. "has a world –class...", not "have".
2. "good reputation" is be
thanks
Reply fangcao1 2010-7-2 17:37
could you send a chinese version?many of yours, I think ,have inappropriate expressiones.such as the tilte of the company,are you sure it is a 'COMPANY'? or "industry"
2."have a world –class art environment" I am not clearly what do you want to convey.you mean"artistic atmosphere" ?  and however,world-class can't coexist with atmosphere
3...

blablabla......
Reply 2amlittle 2010-7-2 17:47
yes,it is a company
Reply C.Robert 2010-7-2 18:00
Be careful with your capital letters. Only at the beginning of a sentence and names of people, places, companies...
Reply 2amlittle 2010-7-2 18:01
fangcao1: could you send a chinese version?many of yours, I think ,have inappropriate expressiones.such as the tilte of the company,are you sure it is a 'COMPAN
yeah,i mean artistic atmosphere
Reply 2amlittle 2010-7-2 18:05
C.Robert: Be careful with your capital letters. Only at the beginning of a sentence and names of people, places, companies...
thanks,and how about the expression
Reply C.Robert 2010-7-2 18:08
2amlittle: thanks,and how about the expression
I'm not sure what you mean exactly, but in general, expressions are normal sentences, with the same grammar rules.
Reply 2amlittle 2010-7-2 18:12
C.Robert: I'm not sure what you mean exactly, but in general, expressions are normal sentences, with the same grammar rules.
oh,i know,thanks
Reply C.Robert 2010-7-2 18:16
2amlittle: oh,i know,thanks
Ohh, I almost forget to say, the letter I, used as in 'me', is also written as capital letter.
Reply 2amlittle 2010-7-2 18:21
  detail is the key of success,right,I...know thanks
Reply 2amlittle 2010-7-2 18:23
C.Robert: Ohh, I almost forget to say, the letter I, used as in 'me', is also written as capital letter.
detail is the key of success,right,I know thanks
Reply 2amlittle 2010-7-2 18:36
fangcao1: could you send a chinese version?many of yours, I think ,have inappropriate expressiones.such as the tilte of the company,are you sure it is a 'COMPAN
help..help...
Reply fangcao1 2010-7-2 22:12
could you send a chinese version to me now.last one was deleted by admin  806432718@qq.com
Reply ibfclass4 2010-7-2 22:28
Although there are a few grammatical errors, but these said the way in which  the company operate it business   we can recoganise the company clearly 0920010357
Reply 2amlittle 2010-7-2 22:35
ibfclass4: Although there are a few grammatical errors, but these said the way in which  the company operate it business   we can recoganise the company clearly
really?but I think maybe there are something that need to be corrected,and I think my expression is not so local
Reply 2amlittle 2010-7-2 22:52
fangcao1: could you send a chinese version to me now.last one was deleted by admin  806432718@qq.com
yeah
Reply 2amlittle 2010-7-2 22:53
fangcao1: could you send a chinese version to me now.last one was deleted by admin  806432718@qq.com
your email adress?
Reply fangcao1 2010-7-2 23:51
I send you the first paraphrase i translate


Xia men ya shi oil painting company, based in xia men, an elegent port city of china,the place which was soaked itself in the top-ranking atomosphere of artistic creation. Ya Shi is an oilpainting company specializing in famous painting copying and creation for both domestic and international market.With a good quality of our products and credit,we remain rapport with customers including artware ex- and import units and other companies around world and naturally obtain a good reputation in the field.

oops ,i am so tired now ......
tomorrow,continun
Reply 2amlittle 2010-7-3 11:22
fangcao1: I send you the first paraphrase i translate


Xia men ya shi oil painting company, located in xia men, an elegent port city of china,which was soaked
thanks a lot
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