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I read of a sentence from a book" Yesterday is history,tomorrow is mystery,and today is gift". "today is gift",therefor i keep in my mind that i should cherish the day to value my life an handred fold.
i get up at 6 o'clock and wash and hurry on my cloth,then learning english for an hour.when the clock strick seven,i have to finish my breakfast and hurry to my work by bus.when i return my home at PM 6 o'clock, i have to continue to learn my english languge, i go to sleep at 23:00. Everyday is a gift,time is my life,as the saying:one is never too old to learn. yeah ,i agree it.
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- Reply sedgehead
- It sounds like you are really studying English very hard, one hour in the morning and five in the evening! I'm impressed. I've been studying Chinese for six years and English for nearly 58 years. So, I can give you better advice on English than Chinese!
You said: >>"today is gift",therefor i keep in my mind
I suggest: "Today is a gift," therefore I keep in my mind
Specifically: 1) two capital letters; 2) one word was mispelled; 3) corrected spacing an punctuation.
>>an handred fold.
hundred
>> i get up at 6 o'clock and wash and hurry on my cloth,then
Changes: "I get . . . o'clock every morning, shower, and hurry to put on my clothes, then"
>> then learning english for an hour.
then I study English for an hour.
Note the capitalization.
>>when the clock strick seven,i have to
strikes seven, I have to
Note differences in spacing and capitalization
>>bus.when i return
bus. When I return
(changes as in last comment). Consider reading my "Sedgehead English: Lesson One" blog.
>>my home at PM 6 o'clock,
I would say "at six p.m." or "at six in the evening" or "at 6 pm." We often do not use "o'clock." and definitely do not combine "o'clock" with "a.m." or "p.m." because a.m. and p.m. also mean "of the clock" or "o'clock".
>>i have to continue to learn my english languge,
I . . . English language,
Use a space after a comma.
>>i go to sleep at 23:00.
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>>Everyday is a gift,time is my life,as the saying:one is never too old to learn. yeah ,i agree it.
Every day is a gift, time is my life, as the saying goes: one is never too old to learn. Yeah, I agree with it!
Note the several changes carefully. It will help your writing look more mature and natural.
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- Reply Maranda
- your life is very regular. i appreciate it very much. And life is a gift, we should cherish it.
- Reply COLMAN
- Maranda: your life is very regular. i appreciate it very much. And life is a gift, we should cherish it.Thank you ,we should hardwork everyday for our future.
- Reply COLMAN
- sedgehead: It sounds like you are really studying English very hard, one hour in the morning and five in the evening! I'm impressed. I've been studying ChineseThank you.I'm very much appreciated for helping me correct my english mistake,learn a languge is a difficult process,but i will try .
- Reply iBen
- Come on ,man! Actually, i have to say you're a hard guy. However, i also feel your way for learning English seems too tedious.
- Reply COLMAN
- iBen: Come on ,man! Actually, i have to say you're a hard guy. However, i also feel your way for learning English seems too tedious.In my opinion,study english is a difficult process,it will take you a long time to learn it better.
but on the weekend i will spend my time in accompanying with my family
- Reply iBen
- As for me, I always manage to let learning English more interesting.Because you're good at what you love; you love what you're good at
- Reply windhearer
- Indeed , to cherish today is of great importance , but you don't forget one thing , that is , never to study without any relaxation, never to work without any rest , otherwise you will become exhausted.
- Reply COLMAN
- yes,i have suffered such miserable things,so i update my study plan.
thank you for your suggestion.
