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571 views. 2010-8-12 07:13 |

      As an English major,I need to learn more and to practice more. Since I know I am not so good and I don’t want to make myself a fool or make others think I am boasting about myself, I find this secret base to write my daily life in English. On one hand, I can practice my writing English. On the other hand,I have a access to know my past in the future. Things happy and unhappy are all here, they can accompany me in my grow up.

      If one day my English is pretty well, I may think all the tracks I leave here are so childish. Anhow,it is a part of me, I will cherish it.

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Reply Teddy126 2010-8-12 07:36
Good start
Honoured to be the first reader of your first article
By the way, I also majorred in English
Glad to meet you
Reply Alinna 2010-8-12 08:11
Teddy126: Good start
Honoured to be the first reader of your first article
By the way, I also majorred in English
Glad to meet you
Welcome to my space.
Reply sedgehead 2010-8-17 08:39
English hints:

You wrote:
>>     As an English major,I need
Use a space after a comma.

>>Since I konow I am not so good
One mispelled word!

>>and I don’t want to fool me or make others think I am boasting myself, I find this secret base to write my daily life in English.
Better: . . . to make a fool of myself or . . . boasting about myself, . . . .
Yes, I use this website the same way.  很多我的家不知道我会写中文。I can write what I want!

>>On one hand, I can practice my writing English. On the other hand,I have a access to know my past in the future.
Use a space after a comma.  For more info, see my "little things" blog.

>>Things happy and unhappy are all here, they can accompany me in my grow up.
Better: . . . me as I grow up.

>>      If one day my English is pretty well, I may think all the tracks I leave here are so childish.
I want to write my autobiography in Chinese!  In fact, I have posted the first paragraph of it on line in Chinese.  And the second version is also online in English, all 32,000 words!

>>Anhow,it is a part of me, I will cherish it.
One mispleed word!  Also, use a space after a comma.

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