I was excited and interested in this article at the first reading which was involved to be   dynamic and impressive consisting of various beautiful sentences. The author gave me a vivid picturesque with aged stone and brick of the entrance, different market with vehemently bargaining, and the procedure of making linseed oil.

  How a beautiful picture have been drawn. A part finished, following another. In the first part, so much detail description of general idea of the entrance of the bazaar has been given. For instance, the one I am thinking of particularly is entered by a Gothic-arched gateway of aged brick and stone. When reading this sentence I was penetrating in thinking what is a Gothic-arched and what on earth how old is the stone and brick.

  As to the second part, which was mostly impressed me. Because so much description of the psychology of bargaining between sellers and buyers has been written in , which would show us a vivid picture of how the customers narrow down the price which the stall-owners required. It gave me a real bargaining atmosphere of the bazaar as if we were really experiencing personally. And different market have different way to bargaining.

  To the last part, which give us a clear introduction of how the linseed oil was made.Very brief introduction has been given in this part.

  On the whole, this article is very excellent