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Your Future Depends on Many Things, but Mostly You

2892 views. 2012-6-11 21:00

In the writing section of this year’s English exam paper in the College Entrance Examination, the exam takers were required to write a 100-120 word essay, which was titled Your Future Depends on Many Things, but Mostly You. They had to express their opinions on it with at least one concrete example. The beginning first sentence was already given. The following is my version of the essay. I did it for fun.

 

In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this, “Your Future Depends on Many Things, but Mostly You.” I can’t agree more with this view. Living in the world, we don’t have full control of our future. Many factors, such as family background, school education, and many other chance happenings, could affect our life and possibly change our fate. However, our personal qualities like our attitudes towards life and work, determination and hard work play a much more important role in the process. Good opportunities always favor those who are well prepared. In other words, our future is basically determined by what we do today.

 

Take Zhang Haidi for example. She was born into a common family. Less fortunate than most of us, she was disabled when she was 5 years old and had to sit in a wheelchair to move around. In many people’s eyes, she would never achieve anything, considering her disability. However, she determined to make her own living and be a useful person. Not only did she teach herself from elementary to high school, but also managed to be a famous writer. Furthermore, she studied acupuncture by herself, and has helped lots of local people with her medical knowledge and skills. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.

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Reply Jimmy621209 2012-6-11 23:26
My dear teacher Rich, i could not  agree more with your view. We never know the next day what will happe, but we can control ourselves at this moment. I always told myself, the next station is not only the terminal but also the starting point in our long road of life. We can not predict the futrue of ourselves, but we must cherish every minute.
Reply sunnyv 2012-6-12 00:30
The candidates taking the exam should be happy because there is a lot to write on this topic. When I took the exam in those days, the topic was to write about a "haunted house". It wasn't easy and quite a few of my classmates failed to reach the passmark.
Reply Kimi011812 2012-6-12 07:58
I do like the topic, but each time when it comes to wrinting composition, I gonna get myself freaked out
Reply rich 2012-6-12 09:40
Jimmy621209: My dear teacher Rich, i could not  agree more with your view. We never know the next day what will happe, but we can control ourselves at this moment.
call me rich if possible. totally agree. life consists of numerous goals. so long as we're still living, our destination will be our starting point the moment we arrive. maybe that's what life is all about. at the same time, however, never forget to admire the view along the road of life. best wishes.
Reply rich 2012-6-12 09:47
sunnyv: The candidates taking the exam should be happy because there is a lot to write on this topic. When I took the exam in those days, the topic was to wri
yes you're right. eveyone has something to say on this topic. i'm thinking what i would write about if i were given the topic of haunted house. do they want to see if the candidates have some literary talent? seems hard. but it gives us large space to use our imagination, which is good.
Reply rich 2012-6-12 09:52
Kimi011812: I do like the topic, but each time when it comes to wrinting composition, I gonna get myself freaked out
freaked out? i don't force myself to write. as with everything else, writing cannot last if there's no fun involved. so try to enjoy the process of writing. have a good day!
Reply ac2smart 2012-6-12 10:30
re-answering the test must feel like fun ! iam gonna do try our local paper lols,
Reply Kimi011812 2012-6-12 12:25
rich: freaked out? i don't force myself to write. as with everything else, writing cannot last if there's no fun involved. so try to enjoy the process of wr
I like writing but hate writing composition, especially those composition for Examination, my heart is still fluttering with fear(心有余悸) when thinking of the frame or stereotype of composition. But I do like writing what I want
Reply Jimmy621209 2012-6-12 12:26
Aha, undoubtedly,trouble just like a friend staying with us in our daily life. Just as the lyrics said, "how many roads must a man walk down, before  we can call him a man." Forrest Gump's mother told him, " Life is like a box of chocolate, we never know what we gonna get." In a large sense, you are my elder and i should learn a numerous things from you if you don't mind. Thank you!
Reply rich 2012-6-12 14:19
Kimi011812: I like writing but hate writing composition, especially those composition for Examination, my heart is still fluttering with fear(心有余悸) when think
i've got what you mean. understandable really. actually i share your feelings. anything for exams will lose its appeal because the purpose of writing is to get a good grade not your real opinions. there're always some rules to restrict your freedom. being a teacher, i wanted to challenge myself. i just want to know if i were a student how i would do it in an effective way.
Reply rich 2012-6-12 14:36
ac2smart: re-answering the test must feel like fun ! iam gonna do try our local paper lols,
being a teacher i just wanted to pu myself in the position of a student. yes it is fun as well as challenging. BTW, what is the topic in your province/city?
Reply rich 2012-6-12 14:47
Jimmy621209: Aha, undoubtedly,trouble just like a friend staying with us in our daily life. Just as the lyrics said, "how many roads must a man walk down, bef
i also like the phrases you mentioned. they're really smart sentences, which have inspired so many youngsters generation after generation. i think it would be better to exchange ideas without age difference in mind. it can offer different perspectives.
Reply Jimmy621209 2012-6-12 22:28
rich: i also like the phrases you mentioned. they're really smart sentences, which have inspired so many youngsters generation after generation. i think it
About life, i am a junior. But i know three grand happiness in life are something to do, something to love and something to hope for. Thanks for your reply, my dear teacher Rich.
Reply monkid 2012-6-14 11:38
Human beings can achieve anything they want!
Everyone has the amazing power which is totally beyond his imagination.
Reply rich 2012-6-14 14:04
monkid: Human beings can achieve anything they want!Everyone has the amazing power which is totally beyond his imagination.
yes you said it. the potential of humans is far from being fully tapped. have fun!

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