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Uncertainty

Hot 3776 views. 2015-12-14 21:01

Jubilant excitement comes after giant and fierce waves of torment.

Approaches to the shore of unknown, finds an unexpected foreign land.

Wondered and indecisive, as it were blindfolded in darkness. 

Frozen fingers hardly to move because of stiffness.

Nowhere else to breakthrough, calling for the almighty guideline of genesis.

Weak breath softens flesh, as if it was all the end.

Marginalization off the shore, light shines via dawn dews.

Diversification of beings awakes the sleepy brain.

Grasp the sense from the corridor to the brightness.

Counterforce from dilemma paves the way to the destination.

All round of hardship contributes greatly to the adventure.

Post comment Comment (12 replies)

Reply ada23 2015-12-14 22:15
from the deep of heart i like the description, initially feeling the impasse but after second rousing your potential strength inside to see the opposition
Reply sunnyv 2015-12-15 00:23
Impressive and original writing. You are gaining strength in choice of words and writing skill. Keep going.
Reply freefu55 2015-12-15 10:32
Quite shocking. It's not your style. So many complex words with leaping thinking, it's hard for me to understand. Could you please make a explanation? Thank you friend. It's true that you are brilliant.
Reply freefu55 2015-12-15 10:33
sunnyv: Impressive and original writing. You are gaining strength in choice of words and writing skill. Keep going.
I wonder how you understand it after reading. Thanks friend.
Reply freefu55 2015-12-15 10:34
ada23: from the deep of heart i like the description, initially feeling the impasse but after second rousing your potential strength inside to see the opposi ...
I wonder how you understand it after reading. Thanks friend.
Reply sunnyv 2015-12-15 14:37
Don;t understand? Just imagine the picture the writer is trying to portray then digest the words accordingly. A few words in there would sketch the initial picture. In the end comes a beautiful scene. That is the pleasure about writing and reading. Encourage everyone to write more for language skills and literary pleasure. However, writing in poetic style or using unconventional words is not suitable here in Dioenglish as most readers won't understand it.
Reply teadrinking 2015-12-15 19:34
ada23: from the deep of heart i like the description, initially feeling the impasse but after second rousing your potential strength inside to see the opposi ...
When we go through it, we find a new era.
Reply teadrinking 2015-12-15 19:36
sunnyv: Impressive and original writing. You are gaining strength in choice of words and writing skill. Keep going.
I am on the way going forward.
Reply teadrinking 2015-12-15 19:47
freefu55: Quite shocking. It's not your style. So many complex words with leaping thinking, it's hard for me to understand. Could you please make a explanation? ...
It is my style I just write this kind of message in this way. Sometimes we have to change and try another method to express what we want. The reason is that I rarely write something like this here, you might feel it not that right as my way.

Surely. I like writing something as I want. They are some stories, poems, and other kind of articles. When I write a poetic style message, usually it is my improvised work within a short time I write down immediately what I inspired in mind.

Actually, it is not that difficult to understand that. As sunnyv said, go with words and then use full of your imagination then you will sense it. And that is also the interesting thing to read something like that and in that kind of way.
Reply teadrinking 2015-12-15 19:53
sunnyv: Don;t understand? Just imagine the picture the writer is trying to portray then digest the words accordingly. A few words in there would sketch the in ...
We can try to understand even though we can not fully know all of its meaning. Sometimes, we have to write something new and use some other styles.
Reply ada23 2015-12-15 21:39
teadrinking: It is my style I just write this kind of message in this way. Sometimes we have to change and try another method to express what we want. The reason i ...
   ,i am laughing to recline.
Reply teadrinking 2015-12-17 12:41
ada23:    ,i am laughing to recline.
It is good to bring you happiness.

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