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698 views. 2010-11-18 18:38 |

It was  my first time to get  sponsorship, we went to so many shops .When we went into shops ,we smiled again and again .But at last ,the boss said to us :"your classmates had already came here."The sun gone down ,but we are still like before. Although we got no support by any shops,we should insist till we get success,     we would insist till we took money .The destination is exercising us .I believe we can face difficult and fight those !

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Reply totalWu 2010-11-18 19:59
Good job...The first step is always difficult.u can do it well
Reply yaping 2010-11-18 20:49
Reply J-Yinlein 2010-11-19 10:55
that's a good article, but a lot of mistake !! do you want me to point you out ?
Reply 刺猬 2010-11-19 13:39
you can do it only believing yourself
Reply 338522 2010-11-19 19:09
J-Yinlein: that's a good article, but a lot of mistake !! do you want me to point you out ?
of course
Reply J-Yinlein 2010-11-19 19:45
first sentence should like this " it was my first time to get sponsorship"  
" although we had not take no money " i can't understand !! are you means you got no sponsorship ? should like that" although we got no support by any shop, we would insist till we get success. " & what this " the destination is exercising us" means ? Do you mean you can enhanced yourself through this experience ??
Reply 338522 2010-11-19 19:49
J-Yinlein: first sentence should like this " it was my first time to get sponsorship"  
" although we had not take no money " i can't underst
yes ,I feel you understand me .every sentense you said is what I want
Reply J-Yinlein 2010-11-19 19:56
anyway well done !! keep writing !!
Reply 338522 2010-11-19 19:58
J-Yinlein: anyway well done !! keep writing !!
OK ! I will insist and do my best

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