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Sights of a Sunset [日没吟] Part I
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The following is a rework of lovingfun's "Causerie". This is the part one. You can see the original HERE. It shocked me when I saw our man lovingfun's "Causerie" the first time. The picture it depicts is striking. So I asked for his permission to reinterpret it into poetry, and he so graciously complied.
以下是 lovingfun 
同学作品的一个重制，这是第一部分。原作品请点击 这里。lovingfun 同学的这篇随笔让我很有感触，在征得他同意的前提下，我将其改为诗歌。拙笔希墨，可能有点面目全非，权当活跃一下气氛。
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- Reply bluephoebe
- 异物: How's your friend doing? I mean the girl in your Wordless.Honestly, not good. She was trapped, and I couldn’t see a way out. The life seemed to keep handing her the short end of the stick. And she, she is so typical a Chongqing girl. Clearly aware of the dead end, still go for it, no holding back.
- Reply 异物
- bluephoebe: Honestly, not good. She was trapped, and I couldn’t see a way out. The life seemed to keep handing her the short end of the stick. And she, she is soI think I like the way she rolls.
- Reply lovingfun
- 异物: Sadly, I'm not a teacher. I am lousy enough to not be able to be even a wannabe teacher. Look at my last sentence, It's sick and twisted, yet grammatiOk. Keep up the pace.
- Reply rich
- good job! as people say poetry and painting are inseparable. reading a good peom is just like appreciating a wonderful picture.
- Reply 异物
- rich: good job! as people say poetry and painting are inseparable. reading a good peom is just like appreciating a wonderful picture.Thank you, Rich.
- Reply 异物
- samscri: God, I could even feel the beauty in your poem...Lovely lovely lovely one!Thank you.
- Reply sophia_2011
- I have not visited here for some time. I am not surprised to see your mastrerpieces which distinguished you from otheres. You really impressed me . It is that that much. As always there is sth within your blog which touch our life and move us and be remembered!
- Reply sophia_2011
- It is an enjoy to read your blog:) , a place to learn and appreciate
- Reply 异物
- sophia_2011: It is an enjoy to read your blog:) , a place to learn and appreciateThank you.
- Reply lushanshan9010
- wooooow , beauty belongs to the beholders , what a breathtaking view in our daily lives .
- Reply 异物
- lushanshan9010: wooooow , beauty belongs to the beholders , what a breathtaking view in our daily lives .
- Reply 异物
- sophia_2011: I have not visited here for some time. I am not surprised to see your mastrerpieces which distinguished you from otheres. You really impressed me .You've being too generous writing such kind words to me, Sophia.
- Reply AlexG
- Great job! You strike me not with your mastering of english, but mastering of english and chinese at the same time. Your passsion for poetry shows your passion for life, that I really appreciate.
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