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Who am I?

653 views. 2011-9-27 15:32

Today,English teacher asked us to write about"who am I" and everyone must have a speeh in front of whole class.So I think I have no lunk to avoid it.
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Good afternoon everyone.I am very glad to join this class.My name is Zhang Jianhua.
 
Many people may feel I come from Anhui.I had been in Heifei for four years because I graduate from Anhui University.In my spare time,I like football.However I feel watching match is more interest than playing.
 
In fact my hometown is Guilin of Guangxi province.I think many people hear about Guilin.there is very nice landscape in my hometown.If anyone would come to Guilin to travel,you may contact with me and I will give you some suggestions.
 
That is all,thanks

Post comment Comment (7 replies)

Reply starrhia 2011-9-27 16:04
If you'd like, I could suggest some things to fix. Your grammar is pretty good but I feel like the overall thought flow could be improved. Just let me know!
Reply Jessico 2011-9-27 16:34
Try to hold the opportunity to speak in front of people. You will get more confidance
Reply bingchuan2011 2011-9-27 16:37
i suffered the same thing a few days ago. our english teacher asked me to give an self-introduction by a little true story, from wich others knew about my characters and personalities.That indeed was an hard task.
Reply 异物 2011-9-27 23:40
starrhia: If you'd like, I could suggest some things to fix. Your grammar is pretty good but I feel like the overall thought flow could be improved. Just let me
Hit the nail on the head.
Reply qinqinjennifer 2011-10-28 09:46
Step by step...
Reply jealousily 2011-10-28 17:19
qinqinjennifer: Step by step...
Go forward
Reply shirleyytt2010 2012-3-2 14:48
I have never been to Guilin.

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