The following sentences,I acknowledge and believe,are especially important and helpful for an English learner:
Consequently,the extra money obtained from a part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.
From what has been discussed above,we may safely draw a conclusion that a part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take a part-time job,which will benefit students and their family,even the society as a whole.
These people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in the past.Many experts point out that,along with the development of modern society,it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.
It is widely acknowledged that computers and other machines have become an indispensable part of our society,which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious.
At the same time,along with the benefits of such machines,employees must study knowledge involved in such machines so that they are able to control them.
No one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for average workers to master those high-technology skills easily.
In the second place,there seem to be too many people without job and not enough job position.
Millions of people have to spend more time and energy in studying new technology and skills so that they can keep a favourable position in job market.
According to a recent survey,a growing number of people express the strong desire to take another job or spend time on their job in order to earn more money to support their family.
From what has been discussed above,I am fully/completely convinced that the leisure life-style is undergoing a decline with the progress of modern society,which is not necessary a bad thing.
The problem of international tourism has caused wide public concern over the recent years.
Many people believe that international turism produce positive effects on the development of economy and local government should be encouraged to promote international turism.