Social practice of college students

    Nowadays, some college students want to do some part-time jobs in summer holiday, while others think they should have a good break in holiday. I am a college student, and I want to try everything. I think that do part-time jobs is good thing. Why do I say so? The reasons are following:

     To start with, as a college student, you have enough time to do some part-time job.  And you will be graduating to work in the future, so this could make you matured earlier. 

     Then, doing part-time jobs can improve your ability. A great deal of knowledge can be learnt through experience instead of books. At the same time, working experience enables you to appreciate the money earned by your parents.

      Finally, It's reasonable time during the summer vacation. And we can make some pocket money by ourselves.

      In short, social practice is very important, and summer vacation is a good time to have the practice for us. I will use this summer to improve my ability.

(This is my homework, please give me advice. Thank you !)