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if I writed myself

530 views. 2012-8-12 19:09 |

Change the colors of the sky.
And open up to
The ways you made me feel alive,
The ways I loved you.
For all the things that never died,
To make it through the night,
Love will find you.
 
 
The sun is breaking in your eyes
To start a new day.
This broken heart can still survive
With a touch of your grace.
Shadows fade into the light.
I am by your side,
Where love will find you.
 
 
I find it beautiful and sharing with you.

Post comment Comment (7 replies)

Reply sunnyv 2012-8-12 19:34
Not too bad, even though there are some excusable mistakes. Seems you are deeply in love. The title should be "I wrote this myself".
Reply freefu55 2012-8-12 19:57
sunnyv: Not too bad, even though there are some excusable mistakes. Seems you are deeply in love. The title should be "I wrote this myself".
Yes, dear friend, you are right, all of us will falling in love at this age, you are the same. but knowing writing a beautiful words is difficult for me, so I cited a song to express my feelings, that makes me feel better. And I know you are kidding me, but still thanks, and who can say I cann't write a beautiful words some day.
Reply freefu55 2012-8-12 20:29
sunnyv: Not too bad, even though there are some excusable mistakes. Seems you are deeply in love. The title should be "I wrote this myself".
am I wrong again? sunyv, you really think I wrote this myself. If it were, my title makes a big misunderstood.
Reply colin0126 2012-8-12 21:45
That's good and nice,thanks very much.
Reply JMZ 2012-8-13 16:21
Thanks for sharing, falling love is a happy thing~~~
Reply sunnyv 2012-8-21 10:18
freefu55: Yes, dear friend, you are right, all of us will falling in love at this age, you are the same. but knowing writing a beautiful words is difficult for
Quite confusing. If you cannot write properly then how did you write this reply to me? The English in your reply is not that bad. Somebody else wrote that for you? Anyway, never underestimate yourself.

You may despise a white beard old man, but never understand a poor young person, one day the the dragon would win the phoenix. Haha... don't know what I am talking about? It is a famous Chinese saying. Good luck.
Reply freefu55 2012-8-21 11:54
sunnyv: Quite confusing. If you cannot write properly then how did you write this reply to me? The English in your reply is not that bad. Somebody else wrote
It's difficult for me to understand, I can not think of that famous saying from my mind unless you tell me, I once played games, and it is hard to tell which one is more stronger between dragon and phoenix...Haha. and what do you mean? I am eager to know the answer. my dear ace friend please.

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