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862 views. 2011-9-23 16:41

I am going to have a interview. And I must introduce myself in English. So i need you to help me to check the mistake.Or you have a better expression please write down. Thank you.

Here is my Self-introduction.

 

Good afternoon, my dear teachers. It’s my honor to be here for your interview. I hope I can make a nice performance today.

Now, let me introduce myself briefly.

My name is xxx and you can also call me xxx. I was born in Shaoguan, Guangdong province. I am a student in xxx University, majoring in Computer Science, and study in Embedded Technology. I am a student in the TI Class in my college. (Here, TI is short for Texas Instruments.) So I learn a lot in TI’s embedded laboratory. Furthermore, I am interested in C programming language and have written a lot of C programs. I joined in the ACM term in July, 2009 and had been trained for 20 days during that Summer time. Those days I got up early and left the laboratory late, thinking the problem I haven’t solved all the time even when I went to bed.

I’ve long dreamed of having a robot. So I joined in the Robot Club when I was sophomore. Fortunately, I had a chance to take part in the Robot Competition at the beginning of Junior. So our team prepared it for a long time. Everything comes to him who waits. We won the Technique Challenge First Prize.

In my spare time, I am open-minded and have broad interests like many other youngsters. I like reading books, listening music especially playing basketball. I often play basketball with my roommates and the guys who next to my room.

Finally, I want to talk about my research field in my graduate time . I hope to pursue for my further education is Embedded Technology. Because I find Embedded Technology is playing a more and more important role in our modern society. Besides, I have learned a lot about it during this year.

       Ok, that is all, thank you for your attention.

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Reply starrhia 2011-9-23 17:24
It's fairly good but I'll give you some suggestions on things I believe could be improved. Most of it is really just small issues.

I'm sure the formalities in China are different but in the US we would not say "my dear teachers." The opener would run more like "Good afternoon. My name is xxx and I am honored to be here for this interview. I hope that my performance will be satisfactory." And so on. But if you feel that the teacher section is absolutely necessary you can leave it.

"Currently I am a student at ..."

"Those days I got up early and left the lab late, even away from work I would continuously think on and try to solve the problems of the day."

These are just some examples of what you could improve. Let me know if you want me to help with the rest of it too.
Reply Abear 2011-9-23 18:36
starrhia: It's fairly good but I'll give you some suggestions on things I believe could be improved. Most of it is really just small issues.

I'm sure the forma
Thank you for your advice. The beginning of my self-introduction comes from Internet.  I think yours is better.
Reply lyrebird06 2011-9-23 19:17
There are so many people who are so kind here. I feel happy.
Reply Abear 2011-9-23 19:50
lyrebird06: There are so many people who are so kind here. I feel happy.
Yes. We all are here to help each other to improve our English and make more friends. You will enjoy it.
Reply rich 2011-9-23 20:16
are you sure all you plan to say is what they want to hear or are interested in? personally i think you should not go too far into the detail. are you expected to show your concret acadecmic level or what kind of person you are?
Reply Abear 2011-9-23 22:15
rich: are you sure all you plan to say is what they want to hear or are interested in? personally i think you should not go too far into the detail. are you
i think detail can let them know me better. Anyway, it is just my way. Thank you for your advice, too.
Reply MJ-W 2011-9-24 16:09
Very good.I Really envy you,hehe.come on!
Reply 异物 2011-9-27 02:04
Not bad.

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