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a letter to my good friend

845 views. 2011-10-25 19:45 |

dear bob:
              i'm terrible sorry that i have forgoten to return the CD to you when i left shanghai in such a hurry,it not until yesterday did i found the cd in my personal baggage.had i been  more carefull then .i wouldn't have commited such a silly mistake.i'm writting to extend my sincere apology to you.
             i understant the CD is one of you favoriates,I would like to use express mail service to solve the problem.i hope you can accept my sincere apologize.

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Reply 异物 2011-10-26 02:21
Forgive my honesty, but your letter suffers from some negligence in the "little things". For more information about the "little things", please click the link below:

http://www.dioenglish.com/space.php?uid=15461&do=blog&id=36979
 
Dear Bob,

I'm terribly sorry that I have forgot to return the CD to you before I left Shanghai in a hurry.  It wasn't until yesterday, when I was pawing through my luggage, I even knew it was there. Had I been more careful, I wouldn't have committed such a silly mistake. I'm writing to extend my sincere apology to you.

I understand this CD is one of your favorites. I would like to use express mail service to solve this problem. I hope you can accept my sincere apology.
 
Or you can write it like this:
 
Dear Bob,

I forgot to return your CD before I left Shanghai. I was in a hurry and wasn't aware of it till yesterday. I understand this CD is of high significance to you. So I'll mail it back, along with my sincerest apology.
 
Oh my! Am I a bit carried away?
Reply Lovelypuppy 2011-11-5 10:00

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