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826 views. 2011-10-14 13:16 |Individual Classification:inception

I came to the end of the life with my love, here is a small port, streching its wood steps into the water. I knew that we came here early, but we knew that when the day came, there's no way to return. People live around here seems didn't worry about that, they greet us as old friends, instead of new comers. I'm curious about some people setting off in their small boat, where are they going? Here is the end, in the front is a large ocean, even larger than Pacific. Should I guess they were off to the other end? This is impossible. Might they just fish for a while. But what about the bigger one sailing off? A couple on board is making fires for cooking, they have good reason to take a longer voyage for they've prepared more food. I suppose they just have a party there, maybe they just enjoy having dinner on a boat. That make sense.

Post comment Comment (5 replies)

Reply 异物 2011-10-14 14:43
That makes perfect sense!
Reply lijuanandrea 2011-10-14 15:43
wherever have a ocean,it's  a  good place
Reply fatty 2011-10-14 20:00
I have seen your another story like this style before, so I guess you are writing a story or translate a story you like into English, do I? please tell me the answer because I have so much interest on your story. and I am looking forward the next charpter.
Reply yuhao 2011-10-14 22:52
fatty: I have seen your another story like this style before, so I guess you are writing a story or translate a story you like into English, do I? please tel
it's  an unrealistic story, maybe I will add more details to make it more vivid, and logic is secondary.
Reply fatty 2011-10-15 09:17
yuhao: it's  an unrealistic story, maybe I will add more details to make it more vivid, and logic is secondary.
yep,after you have finished the whole story, then you can edit it in logic.

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