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796 views. 2009-4-28 16:30 |Individual Classification:my diary|

Beause of my mother wouldn`t like to study English at home by me .
so I plan to  learn the computerized color matching .
And the following day ,I would go there more and more less.
But sometimes I still hope you can visit me .
I am very glad to  see your message .
Don`t forget to keep in touch well .
The time has come to say good bye .
I hope we can see each other again.
See you later.
中文:由于我的妈妈不希望我在家里自学英语.所以我计划去学电脑配色,因此这此天里,我可能上英语会越来越少,但我仍然希望你能常来拜访我,我很乐意看到有关于你的消息,别忘了保持联系哦。
好了,说再见的时间到了,我希望我们下次还能再见。
bye-bye.
What do you think of my translation which from chinese into english?If I don`t translate it well ,please correct mistakes of the arctile .Thanks.

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Reply catnfish 2009-4-28 17:36
hope we'll see you again soon here :)
Reply Tange 2009-4-28 20:56
Nice translation, except for the little mistake on the first word --"beause"  missing the lettle "c".
Reply Houston 2009-4-28 21:53
Hope you can be back soon. This is really a good place to learn English~
Reply RachelBear 2009-4-28 22:57
um....if you do want to improve your written English, I propose that you`d better not translate your Chinese diary into English every time.Just think in English and write it down in English directly,or else, you`ll be accustomed to relying on Chinese and  communicate to foreigners with slow reflection ,because you used to thinking in two steps:Chinese first, then turn it into English~
it`s my personal opinion~may it`s helpful to u~
Reply Sally_Fan 2009-4-29 16:38
Anyway, good luck to you!
Reply dancingshoers 2009-4-29 16:42
catnfish: hope we'll see you again soon here :)
呵呵,谢谢你的支持。
hehe,thank you for you support.
Reply dancingshoers 2009-4-29 16:44
Tange: Nice translation, except for the little mistake on the first word --"beause"  missing the lettle "c".
哦,是的,谢谢指正。
oh,yes,thank you for you correct my mistake.
Reply dancingshoers 2009-4-29 16:46
RachelBear: um....if you do want to improve your written English, I propose that you`d better not translate your Chinese diary into English every time.Just think
en,thank you for you advice,i will try it.welcome come again.

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