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Correcting the wrong short messages

459 views. 2012-3-14 16:34 |Individual Classification:English dairy|

The black sentences are wrong ,and the red sentengces are right.
 
No1.  Someone is going to born the second baby while I am far away from marriage .
Right:  Someone is going to have a second baby while I am  far away fron marriage.
 
NO2.Life is hard for shortage of money. So I think about money every day
Right: Life is hard for a man.So I think about money every day. 

Post comment Comment (6 replies)

Reply sunnyv 2012-3-14 16:37
Another way of writing it is;

While I am far away from marriage, someone is going to have a second baby.
Life is hard when there is a shortage of money, so I worry about money every day.
Reply bbgirl 2012-3-14 17:47
sunnyv: Another way of writing it is;

While I am far away from marriage, someone is going to have a second baby.
Life is hard when there is a shortage of mon
thanks
Reply jiewang 2012-3-15 08:28
Ever tried? Ever failed? Try again! Fail again! Fail better!
Reply bbgirl 2012-3-15 08:45
jiewang: Ever tried? Ever failed? Try again! Fail again! Fail better!
that's the way to success
Reply moli 2012-3-15 10:25
Why do so many Chinese make such the mistakes in writing English sentense? One of the main reasons is that many used to speak Chinese English.
Reply bbgirl 2012-3-15 11:04
moli: Why do so many Chinese make such the mistakes in writing English sentense? One of the main reasons is that many used to speak Chinese English.
yss ,i agree with you very much.

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