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英文写作： Girl
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As she sways her head light
I feel the swoon within tender
I love the way she wears her hair
Be it combed up at work
Or let down neat and long in her daily life
The kind of blushing on her cheeks
For always makes me wonder
Whether it's a kind of natural beauty crimson
The sunshine lighting up my life
Or she is still kind of shy
Even though we have gotten to know
Each other for almost a year
I love the way she is dressed
Cute yet the kind of desire burning within me
Like the roamer Kenshin cannot explain
Why he would sacrifice his everything
For a wink of her smile
And I do resemble the hero now
When she closes her eyes
I wanna lay my kiss on her eyelids
When they are open
I might become so shy
I wanna ask God to give me the strength
To love her more and more each day
And kiss her on the lips sweet
I had felt the touch of sweetness when I first fell for her
And finally I had felt the crashing down when
I was exiled from her world
Her whole being
Where I do not belong
It seems the cruelest thing
To be exiled to a strange land
Far far far away from you
But ain't matter
I am gonna live my life well
Only this cartoon picture
I am talking to now
Silly me
I must be a fool
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- Reply catnfish
- that's really subtle feeling you perceived ~ I like the poem..
hmmm also looking forward to reading some on friendship~ :)
- Reply danielrayslee
- catnfish: that's really subtle feeling you perceived ~ I like the poem..Thanks. You are always supportive.
hmmm also looking forward to reading some on friendship~ :)
- Reply danielrayslee
- evy: The poem is very beautiful.......but too long .When the girl is beautiful, even forever can't seem like long enough.
- Reply danielrayslee
- Downing: the girl is so lovely and the poem is so beautiful !Many thanks
- Reply danielrayslee
- superlucy: Lovable moving verse! Lovable young boy! Lovable little girl!That's why I told you your picture reminds me of all of the sad things...
- Reply vivian_lee
- Is it the reason why your head image looks a little sad and lonely?
- Reply danielrayslee
- vivian_lee: Is it the reason why your head image looks a little sad and lonely?It's inevitable that there is some sadness shown in a boy's face, which maybe got nothing to do with his experiences, but a cool characteristic he is born with. And happiness is what makes a girl, that's why you can always get the sweetness of heart when you see the smiling of a girl.
Girls are lovely, that's why men needs to marry'em, otherwise men would be too depressed to go on living.
- Reply vivian_lee
- danielrayslee: It's inevitable that there is some sadness shown in a boy's face, which maybe got nothing to do with his experiences, but a cool characteristic he isoh, your explanation is interesting~~hehe~~but there is only one thing i can't agree with you,
i think the cool character of the boy is coldness or a forbidding look on his face rather than sadness.
- Reply danielrayslee
- vivian_lee: oh, your explanation is interesting~~hehe~~but there is only one thing i can't agree with you,Youri think the cool character of the boy is coldne finally lets me feel certain that you ARE a quiet girl, which I am so glad at. I'd thought梁朝伟's melancholy style is common is us boys all.
You like boys wearing a cold or forbidden look or boys with a sad look?
- Reply danielrayslee
- ange1a: "I must be a fool".I feel sad in your poam.Thanks for feeling sad. This poem is not written to make readers feel happy, but the negative force of sadness. I have written some "King of Melancholy"(忧郁之王), maybe you can soak in the sad tones penned by the sentimental me then.（你可以尽情享受我在伤感期写下的伤感论调）
Anglella, I know you are crazy about this pop star, so is my mom. Nice to meet you. And thanks for coming over.
- Reply vivian_lee
- yeah,liangchaowei is charming~~~~a cold or forbidden look,or a sad look? i don't know exactly~
- Reply danielrayslee
- vivian_lee: yeah,liangchaowei is charming~~~~a cold or forbidden look,or a sad look? i don't know exactly~A cold look represents some cold-blooded killer, not like the murderers on TV always falling for a tender love and then becoming good again.
Thus, a cold style will not set his heart on fire for you.
A forbidden look belongs with someone who always wanna be in charge, not gonna grant you the complete freedom.
Thus, a forbidden guy is even worse to make a husband. You will feel you are a maid rather than a wife.
A sad look reveals the sad soul. This kinda men yearns for love. Most of them fall into the artist category.
- Reply ange1a
- danielrayslee: Thanks for feeling sad. This poem is not written to make readers feel happy, but the negative force of sadness. I have written some "King of MelaHehe,I'm happy to share idol with your mom!
I thought happy everyday is everyone's wish.But if sad can make you write so many beautiful words,then keep.........
- Reply danielrayslee
- ange1a: Hehe,I'm happy to share idol with your mom!I do not feel sad. The sadness will fade away as I am finished with each writing. But you know, sadness is one of the gifts for boys, many boys lacking which will pretend to have one. And it's from sadness boys raise themselves up and make great accomplishments.Please read the blog, you will understand I do not let sadness be the attitude of my life but a free flow of emotions. And you will see I am just art attacking.
I thought happy everyday is everyone's wish.But if sad can make you write so many beautiful words,then kee
- Reply vivian_lee
- oh, i see,it is reasonable~
- Reply danielrayslee
- vivian_lee: oh,Thanks. When you decide it's time you wanna settle down, look before you reach out and hold his hands. I think this might define the happiness of your life.i see,it is reasonable~
