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英文写作： 原创英文小说Uplook暗地圣婴（4）
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A touch of warmth was felt at the tips of Ray's fingers the moment Lily was handing back the registration form back to him--their hands touched. Actually touched!
A surge of electricity, like 10,000 megawatts, dashing through my whole being, Oh gosh, shot me to death and I would Still Not regret to have touched your lovely hand.
How my mind went empty, face flushing, lips dry, back sweating, hands stiff and knees already getting so weak. Air around ain't in the form of fluid no more, save me I am finding it so hard to breathe. Situation unlivable, it's not that I would not stand on the edge of the London Bridge which is falling down and fall myself down of it cos I have touched your hand, feel the honey-taste of heart and why not die satisfied? But that her 10,000-megawatt or even more smiling and the way she touched me, by accident or by destiny, whatever, the way I am loving her in this frozen minute within which only she and I share! So sad I would trade anything in my life just so I could make this minute last forever...
But I can't.
Her eyebrow gracile, her eyes twinkling, her cheeks blushing, her lips I wanted so bad to lay my kiss on...
"Honey, I love you sooooooooooooo much, will you marry me?"
In spite of her sweet smiling all over my eyes that there's only this desperate blur in my sight, and, and, and her voices talking to me like the lullaby My Mommy used to sing me to sleep when I was a tiny little pee-wee kid...seems like against all odds and the steeplechase, the mountains climbed, the rivers crossed, I finally came to her side and pluck up all my courage to say to her,
"Honey, I love you sooooooooooooooooo much, will you marry me?"
Her cheeks flushing, as always, where I wanna grow my kisses upon, even ten thousand ones a day would not be enough.
And it seemed to have taken forever before lovely words danced out of My Lily's mouth cherry-sweet......
To be continued
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- Reply danielrayslee
- asacao: awesome.... looking forward...Thanks, please continue to be supportive in the days to come.
It's nice of you to come to visit my blog once again, many thanks again for supporting me.
- Reply SmilingAngel
- What a sweet story.
- Reply danielrayslee
- SmilingAngel: What a sweet story.Thanks. Please go on supporting me
- Reply SmilingAngel
- danielrayslee: Thanks. Please go on supporting meOh, I've love to.
- Reply danielrayslee
- Sally_Fan: Wo, it's a strong love, whether Lily can bear it.You'll see. Thanks for reading this novel, just as Charles Dickens loves his "David Copperfield" among all the novels he has written, I also lay my love on this one. I wanna give the best of me to write it well. But I kinda need your support. And who knows, I'd always wanted to be a painter, and now if only I could be an amateur painter, maybe I could write alongsides art attacking. Well, life is fragments of happiness and sadness put together.
- Reply danielrayslee
- SmilingAngel: Oh, I've love to.Thanks, you are a sweet babe.
- Reply shawle
- I'm afraid that the interval is too long,I might forget what is its plot,so I went back to read them again.
Some parts of these words can be regard as an excellent love letter addressed to girls.If someone wanna chase girls,I think I can recommend this for him.Of course,it must get the permission from you at first:)
As a regular reader of your diaries,I am indeed looking forward to the next chapter.
- Reply danielrayslee
- shawle: I'm afraid that the interval is too long,I might forget what is its plot,so I went back to read them again.As for the interval, maybe I should say I am not freed from the worries and cares of everyday life, and memories are just like ghosts, haunting you, which you wanna let go. How can one pluck up the courage to face what he's trying to forget.
Some parts of these words can be regard as
You really think the words can be addressed to the one you love?
The novel is just like some kinda communicating to the girl Ray loves, sth shared by them. Even if other boys take some abstracts from my novel here, they do not love the way that Ray does. What good is it?
Let the emotions flowing between the lines in this novel be unique, and the one and only for the author's experience and liking he still could not let go. Alright? Please try to.
Moving right along to the love letters you want to recommend to the boys, give me some key words and the situation, I may come up with some love poems, though I cannot feel love now, maybe I still got the shadow left behind by the muse.
I wanna say thank you to you, for giving me so sweet attention to my novel.
Sweet of you to have come over.
May you have a good day.
- Reply shawle
- Had I forgotten to reply your reply?:)Hoho~,yes,I really think the words can be beautiful love letters or poems you said.
If some boys steal them to show off their fine language skills in front of girls,the girl who loves her lover loves her with a strong willing might be lost.
So I suggest you be careful about these guys for your rival in love might be one of them.
Of course,duel is just a piece of case for you,especially a duel in English.
