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英语写作: Inner Child

1521 views. 2009-6-13 09:16 |Individual Classification:feelings|

You can see it in my broken smiles
That how I wish
Things were just happening on the other side of the truth around
And now this gray area you have painted upon my heart
Fades away so slowly
As the time drips by
Tardily
Gnawing away my life
The soul always lags the reality
Refusing to accept depression
Yet feeling desperate depression
All the way
What good is
All the
"I am not the Sun
But someone's Son
On this earth
Y'see as long as I live
You will be the Moon in my sky"
With a broken smile on my face?
 

君は、私の淋しい笑顔から

私のすごく希望するのが

すべてのことがあの事実になってしまってっけど

だと知ったのか

それでは、それでは

いま、この心に灰色を絵いてくれたあってしまってっけど

緩慢して退色

時間が滴らすのようだ

ゆっくりして

私の命を侵蝕していくの

ほんとうの物語りより、私の心がずっと緩慢して歩いてくるの

淋しい感触を受け取っていけないてっけど

淋しい感触しているの、すごく、すごくしてって

いつも、いつも

永遠に言っているのが

私は太陽ではないかもしれない、

ただ、地球でのある家庭の

男の子ですけど

わたしは生活していって続け

君は私の空での月なの

それでも

私の淋しい笑顔で

すべてのすべてが

役に立つのかな

Broken smile
笑得破烂
Danielrayslee


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Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 11:22
vivian_lee: actually no~but i can read these words:笑顔 希望 退色 時間 物語 永遠....
This is neat. Actually you can see the universe through a grain of sand, you can only understand me through these few words out of the whole Japanese context.
Reply SmilingAngel 2009-6-13 11:30
danielrayslee: I 've translated it into Japanese now, can you try to read it?
Thanks, but I am not capable to read it yet. I still need time to learn.
Reply vivian_lee 2009-6-13 11:30
danielrayslee: This is neat. Actually you can see the universe through a grain of sand, you can only understand me through these few words out of the whole Japanese
i hope i cansometimes please just smile, all things will be OK
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 11:32
vivian_lee: i hope i cansometimes please just smile, all things will be OK
Are you not happy?
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 11:33
SmilingAngel: Thanks, but I am not capable to read it yet. I still need time to learn.
You can read it soon. Please do what you might to learn both languages well. What do you wanna be?
Reply vivian_lee 2009-6-13 11:35
danielrayslee: Are you not happy?
yeah, maybe...but i am used to...
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 11:41
vivian_lee: yeah, maybe...but i am used to...
U remember me once telling you that girls bringing the sweetest smiles into this world? And that's why we boys need to marry girls to make us complete?
Don't get used to this way.
Reply SmilingAngel 2009-6-13 11:45
danielrayslee: You can read it soon. Please do what you might to learn both languages well. What do you wanna be?
What am I want to be, this question always thinking in my mind, I haven't got the answer yet.  Maybe I think too much and never taken any action. Just thinking, and it seems hardly to come true.
Reply vivian_lee 2009-6-13 11:45
danielrayslee: U remember me once telling you that girls bringing the sweetest smiles into this world? And that's why we boys need to marry girls to make us complete
i remember~just trying to smile~
Reply Clara 2009-6-13 11:59
Anyway,wish you happy every day!
Reply princess 2009-6-13 12:06
I do not understand the kind of language, learning English is also good enough, it is Korean right? I do not know
Reply lover5200 2009-6-13 12:16
I can read it in japanse ,enless you translate it into Chinese
Reply JimKingWang 2009-6-13 12:33
This the best blog writing I have ever encountered by now on this website in the past several days. I have already shared it. Can you tell me what is the specific theme of this poem? Thanks, my friend!
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 12:49
JimKingWang: This the best blog writing I have ever encountered by now on this website in the past several days. I have already shared it. Can you tell me what is
Read my original novel" Uplook", you will know the theme of this poem.
In fact, I am not always having the ability to write poems any more, not in the past.
I kinda read your novel, it seems like you are the kind of person who planned out the plot before you set out to write. I play by the ears.
Nice to meet you.
Reply grechen 2009-6-13 13:00
oh, what a busy place here! it seems i have missed your wonderful discussion.
and you appear to look  desperately for someone who also learn Japanese?
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 13:16
grechen: oh, what a busy place here! it seems i have missed your wonderful discussion.
and you appear to look  desperately for someone who also learn Japanese?
I am not looking desperately for some learning Japanese, the thing is, I wrote the poem, then I wanna translate it into Chinese, the kind illness against which there is no cure cos I am an interpreter, but it seems that I fail for the time being, all I can think about is some Japanese within my mind, thus I try to write it down, I guess the Chinese would come, cos Japanese is kinda similar to Chinese.

I am glad you have finally come.
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 13:34
lover5200: I can read it in japanse ,enless you translate it into Chinese
The Chinese translation will come soon. Thanks for coming over to read my peom
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 13:35
princess: I do not understand the kind of language, learning English is also good enough, it is Korean right? I do not know
Yep, I am glad you said learning English is good. The language below the English peom is Japanese. I don't know Korean
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 13:35
Clara: Anyway,wish you happy every day!
Thanks.
Reply princess 2009-6-13 14:39
oh ,I  am sorry ,I  dont know japanese,but I like english
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