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英语写作: Inner Child

1519 views. 2009-6-13 09:16 |Individual Classification:feelings|

You can see it in my broken smiles
That how I wish
Things were just happening on the other side of the truth around
And now this gray area you have painted upon my heart
Fades away so slowly
As the time drips by
Tardily
Gnawing away my life
The soul always lags the reality
Refusing to accept depression
Yet feeling desperate depression
All the way
What good is
All the
"I am not the Sun
But someone's Son
On this earth
Y'see as long as I live
You will be the Moon in my sky"
With a broken smile on my face?
 

君は、私の淋しい笑顔から

私のすごく希望するのが

すべてのことがあの事実になってしまってっけど

だと知ったのか

それでは、それでは

いま、この心に灰色を絵いてくれたあってしまってっけど

緩慢して退色

時間が滴らすのようだ

ゆっくりして

私の命を侵蝕していくの

ほんとうの物語りより、私の心がずっと緩慢して歩いてくるの

淋しい感触を受け取っていけないてっけど

淋しい感触しているの、すごく、すごくしてって

いつも、いつも

永遠に言っているのが

私は太陽ではないかもしれない、

ただ、地球でのある家庭の

男の子ですけど

わたしは生活していって続け

君は私の空での月なの

それでも

私の淋しい笑顔で

すべてのすべてが

役に立つのかな

Broken smile
笑得破烂
Danielrayslee


Post comment Comment (69 replies)

Reply Fionahere 2009-6-13 19:36
now you are veritably trilingual huh~~~ some lines in the poem reminded of a recent japanese show my colleague suggests--白夜行,but i just saw the first episode of it and had no intention to finish it. it just makes me feel so depressed... in any rate, my colleague told me the main plots of it. they always repeate the sun or moon stuff in it enve until the death of the hero in it.
Reply Judy727 2009-6-13 20:54
If you can translate it into Chinese,I would understand it more deeply.
Reply Judy727 2009-6-13 20:57
Is “君”in Japanese stands for "you"?
Reply Carry 2009-6-13 21:44
I am not the Sun
But someone's Son

Classic words ~!
Reply lover5200 2009-6-13 23:40
Reply shawle 2009-6-14 01:34
Too many comments to make me dizzy...So I left my footprit.
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-15 07:59
Carry: I am not the Sun
But someone's Son

Classic words ~!
Thanks.
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-15 08:04
Fionahere: now you are veritably trilingual huh~~~ some lines in the poem reminded of a recent japanese show my colleague suggests--白夜行,but i just saw the fir
Oh, I never get a chance to watch this show, the moon and the sun are just stuff when you wanna pour out your emotional well, sentimental thing like that, it does not nessessarily mean anything clear as crystal in real life.
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-15 08:07
Judy727: Is “君”in Japanese stands for "you"?
"君" and "anata" can both mean "you", sometimes, people use "君" to show their respect as well as affectionate love.
Reply jenny5211 2009-6-15 16:42
you changed yr photo, and you have worte a artical of the before one, anyway, i like yr blog, and today, yr blog name is "broken smile", is that means one person who smile  to you , but he is unhappy in heart???
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-15 16:52
jenny5211: you changed yr photo, and you have worte a artical of the before one, anyway, i like yr blog, and today, yr blog name is "broken smile", is
Broken smile means both the smile I am wearing on my face to show others as well as the way others make me feel. The denotation of broken smile is just like "She has died the wife of another man", which means "she married somebody else now, she will never be with me." =she's dead in my life.
and my heart is dead.
I hope I make myself clear?
Thanks for reading my blog, Jenny
Reply wffhit 2009-6-15 20:58
the boy......"ろくじょう みはる"?
Your English is good , so is your Japanese.
すごい.
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-16 08:27
wffhit: the boy......"ろくじょう みはる"?
Your English is good , so is your Japanese.
すごい.
Thanks, I majored in English, and Japanese is my second foreign language in college.
Reply Javia 2009-6-18 16:33
the expression "Broken smile"  is  wonderful .
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-18 16:35
Javia: the expression "Broken smile"  is  wonderful .
The expression was first used by the Backstreet Boys, and I kind of feel it, thus I apply it in my poem. You can also go to one of my other blogs describing the Backstreet Boys and me.
Reply 暮光之城 2009-6-19 08:40
nothing is difficult to a man who wills!!
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-19 08:44
暮光之城: nothing is difficult to a man who wills!!
Baby, maybe you misunderstood what my poem means.
Reply 暮光之城 2009-6-19 08:46
danielrayslee: Baby, maybe you misunderstood what my poem means.
maybe, so what is your means?
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-19 08:53
暮光之城: maybe, so what is your means?
It all got to do with Lily and Ray(百合花与阳光,but also the names of two persons) Please read the novel" Uplook" from my blog list" art attack", you would get to know more.
Reply jenny5211 2009-7-13 09:36
danielrayslee: Broken smile means both the smile I am wearing on my face to show others as well as the way others make me feel. The denotation of broken smile is jus
Hope you aren't sad now

and  it's my hounor to read yr blog

i am back

i haven't came here for so long time
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