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It ain’t a bad idea to take your time to go on a picnic in the outdoor especially when the Sky is so cloudless, thanks goodness,we found a place in a countryside, quiet, tranquil. When you are immersed in a poetic and pictorialsurrounding, you must hate to leave.The bathing festival is a thing of the past, so today there ain’t toomany people, last time here was crowed, people believe that having them washed in the time of the local bathing festival can get rid of theillness or potential illness, today it didn’t take us efforts to find abetter place to put up a tent,Having relaxation in the beautiful scenery isn’t all we did, we didn’t forget to roll up trousers to wash carpets, and some clothesin the water….. next time I will buy ajointstool, and then enjoying a sunbath.
the road is uphill all the way, and only cross country cars can cope with this steep road, this is a place above three thousand and six hundred meters above the sea level, but the landscape is cool.
the road is uphill all the way, and only cross country cars can cope with this steep road, this is a place above three thousand and six hundred meters above the sea level, but the landscape is cool.
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It's not a bad idea to take the time needed to go on a picnic in the outdoors especially when the sky is so cloudless. Thank goodness, . . . poetic and pictorial surroundings, you must hate to leave. The . . . so today there aren’t too many people. The last time here we were here it was crowded. People believe that having them washed in the time of the local bathing festival can get rid of their illnesses or potential illnesses. Today it didn’t take us much effort to find a better place to put up a tent. Being able to relax in the beautiful scenery isn’t all we did; we didn’t forget to roll up trousers to wash carpets, and some clothes in the water….. next time I will buy a joint stool, and then enjoying a sunbath.
The road is uphill all the way and only cross country cars can cope with this steep road. This site is greater than three thousand and six hundred meters above the sea level, but the landscape is cool.
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