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My BEC H Homework, to be shared here. Your advice is warmly welcomed!~

945 views. 2009-6-30 11:23 |

According to the graph showed above, Fresh 'n' Cool Sales this year was a little smaller than last year during the same period, in April. Things hit bottom in May, the balance became larger, besides, sales amount reduced, either. In June, sales increased but comparing with the same period last year, it is still reduced. Whilst in July, sales increased evidently and sharply and also exceeded the amount of same period last year. July is the peak, after that, sales began to decrease, however, the turnover is much higher than last August.
                                                
turnover: turning over; gross amount of money taken in business; rate of sale and replacement of goods; rate at which people enter and leave employment etc.; small pie with pastry folded over filling.

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Reply wendy12cool 2009-6-30 12:38
i'm afraid i can't understand it clearly...BEC H homework? It's more like a a summing-up report. (No offense).And what's below the line?
Reply 小攸 2009-6-30 15:36
you should change comparing into compared, add the in front of same. and for the last sentence, after than there are 2 words omited: that in.
Reply 小攸 2009-6-30 15:37
i learn the advanced BEC not so much!
Reply scorpio0914 2009-7-1 11:17
wendy12cool: i'm afraid i can't understand it clearly...BEC H homework? It's more like a a summing-up report. (No offense).And what's below the line?[em:24:
Yeah, kind of. It could be called an annual  report. It is understandable that you can't get to know what I am saying, 'cause it also contains a graph that I didn't show here.
Below the line is the explanation of the word "turnover". I just know its first meaning before.
Reply scorpio0914 2009-7-1 11:22
小攸: you should change comparing into compared, add the in front of same. and for the last sentence, after than there are 2 words omited: that in.
That's right. I fully agree with you! Thanks a lot!
Reply scorpio0914 2009-7-1 11:23
小攸: i learn the advanced BEC not so much!
What do you mean? Have you passed BEC Higher already? Wow....
Reply wendy12cool 2009-7-1 12:18
scorpio0914: Yeah, kind of. It could be called an annual  report. It is understandable that you can't get to know what I am saying, 'cause it also contains a graph
I see~ Thank u for ur explanation.
Reply 小攸 2009-7-1 13:51
i learned BEC but just for fun. i meant i am not so skilled with your work. but i know what you expressed. i majored in English. maybe i can help you!
Reply scorpio0914 2009-7-1 14:03
wendy12cool: I see~ Thank u for ur explanation.
My pleasure!~
Reply scorpio0914 2009-7-1 14:10
小攸: i learned BEC but just for fun. i meant i am not so skilled with your work. but i know what you expressed. i majored in English. maybe i can help you!
Wow, that's great! Thank you so much! I will keep sharing my homework here and welcome to point out my mistakes.

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