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So long times i wanna express my view in english ,but i don't how to express my emotion accurately.i love english i can't how to share what to a song says"love you more than i can say"everyday i try to accepte new in english ,but i don't find my gain,i decide find a new way to improve my english urgently,so i come to dioenglish blog to practice my poor english and to meet with some friends ,As a frensh man i don't how to opreate the web page at first ,but i never give up to take into knowledge ,i always believe in knowledge is infinite ,have knowledge will have a joy .so i have to be faced my poor english,from now on i will spare no effect to practice english .i have a plan to reveal my english everyday no matter how much difficulty .hehe this is my first blog ,Glad my friend to correct it. THANKS!
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- Reply moli
- Your sentences: i don't how to express my emotion accurately./Glad my friend to correct it.
Mine: I don't know how to express my emotion accurately./I will appreciate your help if you could make a correction about my blog.
- Reply SmilingAngel
- What a good beginning!~
Please allow me to rewrite your article or I will write it in my own understanding. Thanks beforehand.
Here comes the aritcle:
It has been a long time that I eager to explain my point of view in English. But I don’t know how to express my emotions accurately by using English. I love English, and it can’t be expressed by words, just like a song’s lyric “love you more than I can say”. I would try to accept any new challenges of learning English. I haven’t realized I’m improved. So I decided to find a new way out to get the improvement urgently. That’s why I come to dioenglish Web to practice my limited English and I would like to make more friends.
As a newcomer I have no idea how to operate all functions well.
I will never give up learning new knowledge, I always believe in learning knowledge will not go beyond; you can have fun when learning it. I admitted my English isn’t good. From now on, I will make the utmost possible efforts to learn English in my spare time. I have a plan that I will use English everyday no matter how difficult it is. This is my first Blog, I am glad that if you could help me with my English. Thanks.
- Reply Angela_smile
- Go ahead, you can do it!
Let's study together.
- Reply lingering
- SmilingAngel: What a good beginning!~give u a ten!haha!
Please allow me to rewrite your article or I will write it in my own understanding. Thanks beforehand.
Here comes the aritcle
- Reply lingering
- hey,guy,we are always here and waiting for u.there is no need that u felt inferior. just do it!
- Reply SmilingAngel
- lingering: give u a ten!haha!Thank you for your evaluation, I am flattered
my my pleasure.haha.- Reply Angela_smile
- knowledge: thanks
- Reply littlegrass
- You are great, and well begun, half success!
- Reply sedgehead
- SmilingAngel: What a good beginning!~I'm so happy to see someone else helping others learn English! Keep up the good work! pH
Please allow me to rewrite your article or I will write it in my own understanding. Thanks beforehand.
Here comes the aritcle
- Reply sedgehead
- Smiling Angel did such a good job of commenting on your blog. I'll give you some additional comments and general rules to follow.
English rules:
1) Use a space after a period or comma, but not before. Look at the way a book is written in English. You will see no space before a comma or period!
2) Use "I" and not "i." No book prints this word as "i."
3) Use more periods. Your sentences are too long!
