Register Login
DioEnglish.com Return Index

You're right, it's ME~ http://www.dioenglish.com/?72882 [Favorites] [Copy] [Shares] [RSS] AND THEN, I MET YOU~

Blogs

hopeless love or forever Love?

Hot 31167 views. 2013-5-8 00:13 |Individual Classification:translation prractice| princess, love, beautiful, forever, passing

 

        Once upon a time, there is a king who hosts a banquet for his princess, and a guard saw this princess passing by at the banquet, she is so beautiful that the guard fall in love at first sight. But how can a guard of humble origins marry a princess? Then he has a chance to bare his heart to the princess: he loves her and can not live without her. The princess is greatly touched, she told the guard: if he can wait under her balcony for one hundred  days and nights straight, she would be wiling to marry him. Thereupon, the guard waits for the princess for one day, two days, ten days………the princess can see him right there under her balcony every night, no matter how nasty weather is, he never miss a day until the ninety-ninth day, the guard stands up and walks away on this day.

 

(this is a chinese to english translation without any refinement , there maybe deficiencies, pls feel free to correct me )

 
    从前,有一个国王为他的公主举办宴会,有个卫兵看见公主走过,她实在太美了,他立刻坠入情网,爱上了她。但是卑微的士兵哪配的上公主?后来,他终于有机会告诉她他不能没有她,公主深深地受感动,她告诉士兵:你如果连续100个昼夜守在我的阳台下,我就以身相许。于是士兵等了1天,2天,10天……公主每晚都可以看见他,刮风下雨,他都不走,但是到了第99夜,士兵起立,搬起椅子,走了。
 
 
 
 
 
 

View AllAuthor's latest blogs

Post comment Comment (8 replies)

Reply lgityt 2013-5-8 08:34
I mean to back the  guard up.The princess should get out from her house at a right time before 99 days
Reply cestlavie 2013-5-8 09:28
I don't understand, why the solder gone at last? why?
Reply sunnyv 2013-5-8 10:16
I think the reason why the guard went away on the 99th day is because a princess making the a guard go through such agony is not worthy of the guard's love.
Reply sunnyv 2013-5-8 10:23
Your translation is fine but there are some minor mistakes in the present/past tense, otherwise it is quite a perfect translation;

Once upon a time, there [was] a king who [hosted] a banquet for his princess, and a guard saw this princess passing by at the banquet, she is so beautiful that the guard [fell] in love at first sight. But how can a guard of humble origins marry a princess? Then he [had] a chance to [reveal] his [thoughts] to the princess: he loves her and can not live without her. The princess is greatly touched, she told the guard [that] if he can wait under her balcony for one hundred  days and nights straight, she would be wiling to marry him. Thereupon, the guard waits for the princess for one day, two days, ten days………the princess can see him right there under her balcony every night, no matter how nasty weather is, he never miss a day until the ninety-ninth day, the guard stands up and walks away on [that] day.
Reply Soko 2013-5-22 10:01
lgityt: I mean to back the  guard up.The princess should get out from her house at a right time before 99 days
y you r a optimist. like the happy ending of the fairytale "From then on, they lived happily ever after"   everyone loves this , but in the real world ,  things are not like that~ how i wish that all love can be the same as fairytale~
Reply Soko 2013-5-22 10:11
cestlavie: I don't understand, why the solder gone at last? why?
It is perhaps only because of having regrets that the love can be everlasting  beautiful, why the guard quit on the 99th day , that's the keypoint of the story , bcz he is scared that when he waits for 100 days , the princess would not keep her promise , in that case , he would be brokenhearted, the reason why he leave on the 99th day ,  he wants  the princess to remember him forever .   have you ever watched the Japanese TV drama <Tokyo Love Story>  then you would understand ~
Reply Soko 2013-5-22 10:13
sunnyv: Your translation is fine but there are some minor mistakes in the present/past tense, otherwise it is quite a perfect translation;

Once upon a time,  ...
Thanks a lot for your correction my draft~  
Reply cestlavie 2013-5-22 14:48
Yeah, i ever seen that TV drama, but i think only the writer himself knows the answers.

facelist doodle 涂鸦板

You need to login first Login | Register

每周一篇英文日志,坚持一年,你的英语能力将发生质的飞跃!

DioEnglish.com --- A Nice Place to Practice English and Make New Friends!

English Writing, English Blog, English Diary, 英语角, 英语写作, 英文写作, 英语交流, 英语日记, 英语周记, 英文日记, 英语学习, 英语写作网, 英语作文大全

Website Rules|Contact Us|茶文化|英文博客网 ( 京ICP备06064874号-2 )

GMT+8, 2024-4-28 04:59

Powered by DioEnglish.com

© 2008-2013 China English Blogs

Top