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The Secret of 115 in CET4 Composition

575 views. 2009-2-28 18:04 |Individual Classification:study|

       As far as we know, the full score in CET4 composition is 120,fortunately,mine was 115,I think,
it is indispensable to my large vocabulary and the accumulation of knowlege in my spare time.
      When my first sight of the topic appeared,the first word in my brain was "indispensable".The plastic
bags used to be necessary in our common life,we nearly thought we couldn't live without it.Therefore,in my
first paragraph I narratived the previous time when people were accustomed with plastic bags.I wrote many kinds of  place where people used them.
     In my second passage,I talked about the hazard of using them and the delimma people are faced with.
Here, I refered to the contradiction between economical development and environmental protection.Meanwhile,I emphasized the resolution of protecting enviroment in people's mind.
     At last,I summaried the significance of restricting the plastic.In this paragraph,I quoted the famous remark---Peace and development are the two main topic in contemporary society.Of course, I didn't forget to mention the sustainable development.
     In a word, when I finished the compositon, I felt very satisfactory but the result was still elated to me.Dear friends,what's your evalution to mine?Welcome to all your comments!!!

Post comment Comment (19 replies)

Reply scarlet 2009-2-28 19:01
Awesome!
Reply ybq1215 2009-2-28 20:46
your are really smart , hehe
Reply fangfeline 2009-2-28 21:08
ybq1215: your are really smart , hehe
Thank you.Would you please point out my weakness?
Reply fangfeline 2009-2-28 21:13
scarlet: Awesome!
Obviously I really made progress in a large scale.Actually ,in my NEMT and PETS4,my composition score were both too low!
Reply ybq1215 2009-2-28 21:21
fangfeline: Thank you.Would you please point out my weakness?
i  think you should practise writing often ,
don't spend too much time memorising words ,
Reply ybq1215 2009-2-28 21:21
fangfeline: Thank you.Would you please point out my weakness?
which university are you in
Reply fangfeline 2009-2-28 21:40
ybq1215: i  think you should practise writing often ,
don't spend too much time memorising words ,
Yes, I will keep on updating my blogs weekly or more frequently.
Thank you for your advice!
Reply fangfeline 2009-2-28 21:42
ybq1215: which university are you in
Shamefully speaking,I'm in a college in Yaohu campus in Nanchang
called 江西工业职业技术学院.
Reply ybq1215 2009-2-28 22:08
fangfeline: Shamefully speaking,I'm in a college in Yaohu campus in Nanchang
called 江西工业职业技术学院.
it is not shameful , my brother is in nanchang  science and technology and normal college ,
Reply ybq1215 2009-2-28 22:11
fangfeline: Yes, I will keep on updating my blogs weekly or more frequently.
Thank you for your advice!
you are at the age of 24, when will you graduate ,
i had thought that you are a postgraduate student ,
wish you secure a good job after your graduation ,
Reply fangfeline 2009-2-28 22:14
ybq1215: it is not shameful , my brother is in nanchang  science and technology and normal college ,
As a matter of fact,my college is worse than it and mine is an
obscure名不见经传的college.Perhaps I 'm too pessimistic.
Reply fangfeline 2009-2-28 22:19
ybq1215: you are at the age of 24, when will you graduate ,
i had thought that you are a postgraduate student ,
wish you secure a good job after your graduati
I entered my college much later than the peers,which
let me feel a little inferior at once.
Reply ybq1215 2009-2-28 22:23
fangfeline: As a matter of fact,my college is worse than it and mine is an
obsecure名不见经传的college.Perhaps I 'm too pessimistic.
enhance your capabilities constantly , spend time efficiently and fruitfully , even the most obscure college can produce a remarkable man ,
i am an english  teacher in shanghai , i graduated in 2007.
wish you good luck in the forthcoming job-hunting,
Reply ybq1215 2009-2-28 22:30
fangfeline: I entered my college much later than the peers,which
let me feel a little inferior at once.
i can understand your feelings acutely ,
because i entered college also at the age of 20.
sometimes when i know my colleague is younger than me , i will feel envious of them ,
too much time has been wasted resultlessly , i must admit ,
maybe i  should make the best use of time to commpensate the time which has been wasted ,
Reply fangfeline 2009-2-28 22:31
ybq1215: enhance your capabilities constantly , spend time efficiently and fruitfully , even the most obscure college can produce a remarkable man ,
i am an e
Are you encouraging me?
I am really moved ,it's my real fortune to make friend
with you.I convince I myself have "appreciation增值
space " and I am supposed to tap my full potential by
all means.
Reply ybq1215 2009-2-28 22:33
fangfeline: Are you encouraging me?
I am really moved ,it's my real fortune to make friend
with you.I convince I myself have "appreciation增值
space "
your words are indeed very inspiring ,
wish you succeed in the future ,
good night ,
Reply fangfeline 2009-2-28 22:37
ybq1215: i can understand your feelings acutely ,
because i entered college also at the age of 20.
sometimes when i know my colleague is younger than me , i
My God!You were in my shoes when I am.(Slang)
Apparently your present circumstance must be better than what I will be in.
Reply calla 2009-3-1 11:34
fang.congratulation!
Reply fangfeline 2009-3-1 14:08
calla: fang.congratulation!
Thank you for your comment!

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