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MY OWN POEM——BABE, DON’T CRY

479 views. 2008-12-30 17:12 |Individual Classification:POEMES|

When you find beauty no longer belongs to you,

      Babe,don’t cry;

      When you find fortune no longer belongs to you,

      Babe,don’t cry;

      When you find future no longer belongs to you,

      Babe,don’t cry.

      ’Cause of me, babe, who never wanna see you tearing.

      You’re the most perfect girl in my eyes,

      Whose beauty will never be erosed by the time;

      You are the greatest present Godness grant to me,

      Who is so invaluable

         That I will cherish with my whole life;

         However desperate you have, remember,

      There is always a person who keeps fingers crossed for you.

      Babe,babe,don’t cry.

      When breeze is kissing your cheeks,

      That is my hands are erasing your tears gentlely.

Post comment Comment (10 replies)

Reply asacao 2008-12-30 17:44
beautiful..
Reply fangfeline 2008-12-30 21:06
asacao: beautiful..
It's the greatest prize for me to read such comment.
Reply pw_qd 2008-12-30 22:02
i think  i have more more learn from you
Reply fangfeline 2008-12-30 22:08
pw_qd: i think  i have more more learn from you
Thank you for your compliment.
We all need to learn from various people all the time.
Reply jj198017 2009-1-2 11:24
We all need to learn from various people all the time.
i agree this sentence,me too.
Reply fangfeline 2009-1-2 11:41
jj198017: We all need to learn from various people all the time.
i agree this sentence,me too.
Great minds think alike.
Reply Erica 2009-1-10 14:13
Did a good job ,your poem is elegantly!
Reply calla 2009-1-10 14:55
哈哈  elegantly!  i  like it !!
Reply fangfeline 2009-1-20 07:17
Erica: Did a good job ,your poem is elegantly!
Thank you for dengzi's appreciation!
But i don't always have such aspiration~~
It took me nearly 2hours to composite it!
Reply fangfeline 2009-1-20 07:18
calla: 哈哈  elegantly!  i  like it !!
I can, you can!!!

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