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My heart is flying

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This is my first blog in the Year of Tiger.Now,firecrackers still go bangs hither and thither outside.But compared with the eve of the New year,the sounds of firecrackers are not that deafening.but the happy moods of Chinese still don't fade away.This festival will last about another ten days untill  the Lantern Festivial.Before i begin my article,i want to say hello to those foreigners who stay in Chinese to celebrate the Spring Festivial with us.On the eve of Lunar New year, watching Spring Festivial Gala held by CCTV is a must-do for majority of Chinese. Every year,in this gala,there are a lot of fabulous programmes will be performed by stars.Though the director of it  will never fail to be criticized by some critics,the gala itself can amuse the masses on the eve of Lunar New year.This year,a comic sketch made a deep and indelible impression on me.The name of the comic sketch is My heart is flying which depicts a moving story happened in a female air squadron during the preparation for the Grand Parade of the National Day of last year.According to the settled arrangement,the air squadron would take part in aerial parade and those pilots would  fly over the Tian an Men Square in three formation flights.Each formation flight would consist of five jet fighters.The problem emerged,one female pilot would miss the exciting aerial parade because there are 16 pilots in this air squadron and the one left could't accept the imposing inspection of the leaders as well as the masses in the once-in-a-lifetime opportunity.But who will be left to serve as a bench-warmer?The commander of the squadron didn't know how to make the decision.All the female pilots were excellent and they were chose from tens of thousands of candidates.Each of them could be  competent at this job.At last.the commander of the squadron focused her eyes on a pilot who was the most excellent one.She could fly on any position of any kind of formation flight.This female pilot accepted this decision.This meant each time,her jet fighter would take off with the other five fighters together.When they reach the the standard line of aerial parade and if there was no other fighter in trouble,she would turn around lonely and fly back to her base to escort next batch of fighters.This is a kind of torture for a pilot.In the comic sketch,in order to comfort the pilot who is left,the other pilots decided to put down the name of the lone pilot on their uniforms.And when they were expounding lines,I was touched to tear.The lines are:When i am flying,you are flying too.Your flying is the akin to my flying.I can understand the mood the pilot who was left.She is a great girl who can left opportunity to others.In moderm terms,this should be called spirit of team work.Though the image of her jet fighter was not left in the records of National parade.people don't forget this beautiful girl,at the end of the comic sketch,the whole squadron appeared on the center of stage.The first girl was that pilot who was left.And I think her firm countenance has been left in the heart of every Chinese. Her heart is flying.My heart is flying and your heart is flying.For what?For the better future of our great motherland. 

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Reply sedgehead 2010-2-16 12:17
What a fantastic story!  Thanks!  If you want to improve your writing style, pay attention to the little things.  What are the little things?  See my blog titled "Sedgehead English: Lesson One."
Reply liudongming 2010-2-16 12:28
sedgehead: What a fantastic story!  Thanks!  If you want to improve your writing style, pay attention to the little things.  What are the little things?  See my
Dear Sedgehead:before i wrote this blog,i had been thinking of one thing:how to improve my writting style according to the advices in your great blog.I have read it several times carefully and i have begun touching my article up one by one. thank you sedgehead.thank you!
Reply liudongming 2010-2-16 12:36
sedgehead: Since you have shown an interest, I will post a detailed response to show you the details of how it would change.  Words that I change will be in CAPI
I will do this job now.your advices are timely.One the way of my learning English,you are the smack great teacher or the kind friend who let me touch what is real English.
Reply sedgehead 2010-2-16 12:40
I have re-written this blog to show you how it would look with the "little things" improved.

This is my first blog in the Year of Tiger. Now, firecrackers still go bangs hither and thither outside. But compared with the eve of the New year, the sounds of firecrackers are not that deafening; but the happy moods of Chinese still don't fade away. This festival will last about another ten days until . . . the Lantern Festivial. Before I . . . begin my article, I . . . want to say hello to those foreigners who stay in CHINA to celebrate . . . Spring Festivial with us. On the eve of Lunar New year, watching Spring Festivial Gala held by CCTV is a must-do for majority of Chinese. Every year, in this gala, there are a lot of fabulous programmes will be performed by stars. Though the director of it . . . [a space is deleted] will never fail to be criticized by some critics, the gala itself can amuse the masses on the eve of Lunar New year. This year, a comic sketch made a deep and indelible impression on me. The name of the comic sketch is "My Heart is Flying" which depicts a moving story WHICH happened in a female air squadron during the preparation for the Grand Parade of the National Day of last year. According to the settled arrangement, the air squadron would take part in aerial parade and those pilots would . . . [a space is deleted] fly over the Tian an Men Square in three formation flights. Each formation flight would consist of five jet fighters. A problem emerged; one female pilot would miss the exciting aerial parade because there are 16 pilots in this air squadron and the one left couldN't accept the imposing inspection of the leaders as well as the masses in the once-in-a-lifetime opportunity. But who will be left to serve as a bench-warmer? The commander of the squadron didn't know how to make the decision. All the female pilots were excellent and they were chose from tens of thousands of candidates. Each of them could be . . . competent at this job. At last, the commander of the squadron focused her eyes on a pilot who was the most excellent one. She could fly on any position of any kind of formation flight. This female pilot accepted this decision. This meant each time, her jet fighter would take off with the other five fighters together. When they reach the the standard line of aerial parade and if there was no other fighter in trouble, she would turn around lonely and fly back to her base to escort next batch of fighters. This is a kind of torture for a pilot. In the comic sketch, in order to comfort the pilot who is left, the other pilots decided to put down the name of the lone pilot on their uniforms. And when they were expounding lines, I was BROUGHT to tearS. The lines are: When i am flying, you are flying too. Your flying is the akin to my flying. I can understand the mood the pilot who was left. She is a great girl who can left opportunity to others. In moderm terms, this should be called spirit of team work. Though the image of her jet fighter was not left in the records of National parade, people don't forget this beautiful girl, AND at the end of the comic sketch, the whole squadron appeared on the center of stage. The first girl was that pilot who was left. And I think her firm countenance has been left in the heart of every Chinese. Her heart is flying. My heart is flying and your heart is flying. For what? For the better future of our great motherland.

Great story!  Thanks for sharing it!
Reply sedgehead 2010-2-16 12:42
liudongming: I will do this job now.your advices are timely.One the way of my learning English,you are the smack great teacher or the kind friend who let me touch
可是我的中文不好!你会是我的老师!我想很好。
Reply liudongming 2010-2-16 13:26
Dear Sedgehead,thank you for your kindness.Among the bloggers in the space,i am the luckiest one.thank you again.with your help,i think i will improve my English by leaps and bounds.I am very glad that you are going to master Chinese.I think you can learn it well because i have discerned the progress you made in your expresision in Chinese.Do you remember that your once posted your slogan in your blog like this:今年很雪很冷!The charactor,xue,is a noun and should not be used as an adjective.but now this kind of things don't show up in your articles any more,congratulatios.
Reply alandeng 2010-2-18 09:45
I think your article is excellent, I see this piece in spring gala, it's a moving story.
Reply liudongming 2010-2-19 13:05
alandeng: I think your article is excellent, I see this piece in spring gala, it's a moving story.
yes,it is.nice to meet you.

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