My classmate

Sabrina, what’s a beautiful name! Yeah, she is also with good-looking like an angel. I feel pretty honorable sitting behind her as a member of the same group.

She is one of charming students at Only college. She is a Shanghai native resident. And She really minds her clothing, speaking and behaving. But you can feel a warm heart under her appearance, and also can feel a strong desire to better herself with English. At same time, she usually appears friendly and keen on speech. She grasp a lot of knowledge about English in different areas, such as translation, interpreting. And her dream is to stimulate oral ability and writing skill.

All in all, if you talk with her, I promise you will agree with my comment to her.

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My Classmate

Sabrina, what’s a beautiful name! Yeah, she is also with good-looking like an angel. I feel pretty honored sitting behind her as a member of the same group.

She is one of charming students at Only college. She is a Shanghai native resident. She really cares about her clothing, speaking and behaving. But you can feel a warm heart under her appearance, and can also feel a strong desire to better herself with English. At the same time, she usually appears friendly and keen on speech. She grasps a lot of knowledge about English in different areas, such as translation, interpreting. And her dream is to stimulate oral ability and writing skills.

All in all, if you talk with her, I promise you will agree with my comment about her.