2008-1-22

I like the general vein of your writing, but it's very difficult to try to understand what you're saying. You need to read mainstream English more carefully and try to mimic it.

Here's my revision of what you wrote, making best guesses where the meanings are unclear:

Today, I feel valued, and gratified in the heart. It's been a long time since I had this feeling. In the morning, with my backpack on my back I went to visit an animation company to gain an understand of the industry. I learned quite a bit from this visit. Compared with what I was taught in school and later in the real world, I gained better insight and learned how to set my goals and also approach studying with confidence. In the afternoon, I tidied up my study room, and sorted out the material related to my experience in the morning to go to my friend's house. We share interesting experiences from our respective lives.  There are numerous words and ideas in our minds that we wanted to share ardently. Because we had been apart for a long time before the winter vacation. We watched cartoons together, exchanged our viewpoints about a beautiful scene. Why does the director use such a perspective (you mean angle?) for a shot? How there are so many wonderful elements in the shots of this animation film. How moving the song of the ending（片尾）is. The time flew by rapidly. Before long it was the 22: 00. We were completely oblivious of the time.  I had to leave. He walked me to the entrance of his community (or dormitory? or compound if he lives in an apartment complex).

I feel very lucky to have a friend like him. I feel that this world is full of colors and happiness.