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Tomorrow is the 60 years celebration for our country.
I'm proud of that our country is become more powerful and richer.
I hope people can live happily forever.
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- Reply Collegeguru
- Just came across this post and I'm just here to make some suggestion to your sentence structure ,word choices, grammatical issues. No offense, like you I am also very happy for the our nation's 60th anniversary.
Tomorrow is the 60th anniversary of our nation's independence.
I'm proud of our country because it has became richer and more powerful.
I hope people can live happily ever after.
- Reply frankwangzhe
- Dear Collegeguru,
Thank you for your help.
Your sentence is so beautiful!
