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英语写作: Inner Child

1502 views. 2009-6-13 09:16 |Individual Classification:feelings|

You can see it in my broken smiles
That how I wish
Things were just happening on the other side of the truth around
And now this gray area you have painted upon my heart
Fades away so slowly
As the time drips by
Tardily
Gnawing away my life
The soul always lags the reality
Refusing to accept depression
Yet feeling desperate depression
All the way
What good is
All the
"I am not the Sun
But someone's Son
On this earth
Y'see as long as I live
You will be the Moon in my sky"
With a broken smile on my face?
 

君は、私の淋しい笑顔から

私のすごく希望するのが

すべてのことがあの事実になってしまってっけど

だと知ったのか

それでは、それでは

いま、この心に灰色を絵いてくれたあってしまってっけど

緩慢して退色

時間が滴らすのようだ

ゆっくりして

私の命を侵蝕していくの

ほんとうの物語りより、私の心がずっと緩慢して歩いてくるの

淋しい感触を受け取っていけないてっけど

淋しい感触しているの、すごく、すごくしてって

いつも、いつも

永遠に言っているのが

私は太陽ではないかもしれない、

ただ、地球でのある家庭の

男の子ですけど

わたしは生活していって続け

君は私の空での月なの

それでも

私の淋しい笑顔で

すべてのすべてが

役に立つのかな

Broken smile
笑得破烂
Danielrayslee


Post comment Comment (69 replies)

Reply vivian_lee 2009-6-13 09:57
everyone's inner child should not be hurt, it is innocent. i have got it and i am feeling it
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 10:17
vivian_lee: everyone's inner child should not be hurt, it is innocent. i have got it and i am feeling it
I can translate this into Japanese first and then Chinese. The inner child wants it happening the happy way, but as a grown-up, the mature mind has decided all is gonna be in vain.
Reply princess 2009-6-13 10:27
your inner child hurt,are you ok
Reply vivian_lee 2009-6-13 10:28
danielrayslee: I can translate this into Japanese first and then Chinese. The inner child wants it happening the happy way, but as a grown-up, the mature mind has de
wish you a happy day anyway~~
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 10:32
vivian_lee: wish you a happy day anyway~~
The same to you. But don't say good bye to me.
Reply SmilingAngel 2009-6-13 10:33
I feel that you are unhappy. Probably I am wrong.
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 10:33
princess: your inner child hurt,are you ok
Do you love the expression "Broken smile"? As we grow up, the inner child living along with us is always hurting. Don't you think so?
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 10:35
SmilingAngel: I feel that you are unhappy. Probably I am wrong.
Sometimes I really am not happy, but other times I am all right, just moving on with the past we determine to leave behind.
Reply vivian_lee 2009-6-13 10:36
danielrayslee: The same to you. But don't say good bye to me.
i won't~~~happy to talk with you~
Reply SmilingAngel 2009-6-13 10:37
danielrayslee: Sometimes I really am not happy, but other times I am all right, just moving on with the past we determine to leave behind.
I am happy with you this face, you are all right now.
Reply princess 2009-6-13 10:39
yes ,In fact, a lot of things as we grow up not as we imagine, as the development of the original, so we feel wounded
Reply wenson86926 2009-6-13 10:59
i didn't get your meaning
Reply lover5200 2009-6-13 11:01
I hope you will be happy every day ,a broken smile does't means a broken life
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 11:02
vivian_lee: i won't~~~happy to talk with you~
I've just translated my poem into Japanese, can you read it?
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 11:03
wenson86926: i didn't get your meaning
I have translated it into Japanese now, maybe you will understand it in Japanese.
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 11:04
princess: yes ,In fact, a lot of things as we grow up not as we imagine, as the development of the original, so we feel wounded
I've translated it into another language now, maybe you could read it in this another language I know.
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 11:05
SmilingAngel: I am happy with you this face, you are all right now.
I 've translated it into Japanese now, can you try to read it?
Reply danielrayslee 2009-6-13 11:05
lover5200: I hope you will be happy every day ,a broken smile does't means a broken life
Can you read the Japanese version I just translated right now?
Reply wenson86926 2009-6-13 11:07
danielrayslee: I have translated it into Japanese now, maybe you will understand it in Japanese.
i see
Reply vivian_lee 2009-6-13 11:08
danielrayslee: I've just translated my poem into Japanese, can you read it?
actually no~but i can read these words:笑顔 希望 退色 時間 物語 永遠....
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