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my foreign friend revised my diary(22)

616 views. 2009-12-15 14:27

My foreign friend Avangi made some correction about my diary "Thank you, my friend". I would like to express my gratitude for his kind help.

 

This morning I received a friend’s short message, who told telling me that he was happy to receive the Christmas card from me.

 

Both of us We met on the internet by accident in Apr, 2008. He was so busy with his work so that he hardly had time to chat with me online. But he always left some message on QQ such as "Take care of yourself ," or "Be careful on the way home". He really impressed me made a lasting impression in my memory.  

 

I bought a morning newspaper on Oct 17, 2008. At noon I noticed that my daughter's article was published in that newspaper. I got very excited at that moment and wanted to buy another copy. the newspaper again. But it was nearly impossible to buy it at noon, for that morning newspaper has been sold well. But by then, the morning paper was sold out at all the local newsstands.

 

I called him to ask for help explain the situation, and he answered that he would do his best to do that. help me. At about 3 o'clock pm in the afternoon, he sent it to me.  I received a copy of the newspaper from him.

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Post comment Comment (11 replies)

Reply bbljw 2009-12-15 16:41
hehe,I'm learning
Reply moli 2009-12-15 16:45
bbljw: hehe,I'm learning
Reply wendy12cool 2009-12-16 14:15
sometimes we just been chinglish, isn't it? but things got better
Reply zblok 2009-12-16 16:58
“He was  busy with his work so that he hardly had time to chat with me online.”was revised very well.(so......that......)
Reply 冰壶流年 2009-12-17 21:43
such a nice friend
Reply Aaron227 2009-12-22 09:00
He is a good guy...
Reply moli 2009-12-22 09:08
Aaron227: He is a good guy...
Yeah.
Reply ChrisDanni 2009-12-22 11:14
Thank you for sharing and your effort in marking differently the errors.
Reply Water_Justiin 2009-12-22 19:29
Such a brilliant simple refer to how to establish and develop a precious friendship with a forign friend. You performed nice and I wish the that will be permanent.
Reply moli 2009-12-23 08:40
Water_Justiin: Such a brilliant simple refer to how to establish and develop a precious friendship with a forign friend. You performed nice and I wish the that will
Reply xajie 2009-12-23 14:28
how to touch with you friend

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