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2018年9月8日雅思大作文写作真题范文解析:社会资源浪费问题

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2018年9月8日的雅思大作文终于考到了环保类话题,Nowadays people are living in a “ thrown-away” society where they use things for a short time and then throw away. What cause this and what problem it may lead to?探讨社会中出现的一次性社会(浪费型社会)的形成原因及影响。



范文解析 本题属于社会生活类话题。题目问题要求阐述导致“ thrown-away” society 的原因以及该现象导致的问题。属于说明文类型的文体。考生在答题时,切忌看清题目要求,不要惯性思维写原因和解决方法。此外,思考思路时务必结合现实情况,如个体本身没有这样的习惯则联想身边有该类特征的人群,以便快速得到论点。

文章结构 P1:改写现象并写出承接句。

P2:阐述导致该现象的第一个原因,即市场上有大量便宜的商品。

P3:阐述导致该现象的第二个原因,即广告诱导消费者追赶潮流从而丢弃旧物品。

P4:阐述该现象导致的问题。第一,造成了环境污染;第二,造成了不良生活方式。

P5: 总结上文内容。

雅思大作文高分话题表达

two contributing factors can be identified 两个促成(该现象)的理由可以被证实

it is precisely because of… 正因为。。。。。。

would do sth rather than… 宁愿做。。。。。。而不。。。。。。

brand new 崭新的

be exposed to 被暴露在。。。。。。之下

glamorous 富有魅力的

dump 丢弃

decompose 分解

landfill 垃圾填埋法

materially abundant but spiritually barren 物质丰富但是精神贫瘠

be discouraged from 被阻止。。。。。。

雅思写作高分结构

it is a ubiquitous tendency that… 同位语从句

the most apparent reason is that… 表语从句

…as much as… 比较状语

Another ground why…is …. 定语从句

Inevitably,… 副词放在句首

…, contaminating… 现在分词做结果状语

雅思大作文范文

In this fast-paced society, it is a ubiquitous tendency that modern people throw away things utilized for a short period of time. As far as I am concerned, two contributing factors can be identified as below.

在这个快节奏的社会里,现代的人们抛弃了在短时间内使用的东西,这是一种普遍存在的趋势。就我而言,可以确定以下两个因素。

The most apparent reason is that massive production conduced by technological advancement renders cheap products are available for most consumers. It is precisely because of the fact, the public do not value what they have owned as much as they used to. A case in the point is that, once the hairdryer worth around 100 yuan fails to function well, its owner would discard it rather than repairing it as the expense of buying a brand new one is not quite high.

最明显的原因是,由于技术进步,大规模生产使得大多数消费者都能买到便宜的产品。正因为如此,公众并不像过去那样重视他们所拥有的东西。一个例子是,一旦价值约100元的电吹风不能正常运转,它的主人就会把它扔掉,而不是修理它,因为购买一个全新的品牌的费用并不高。

Another ground why people refuse to wear the same dress or use the phone for years is the impact of advertising campaigns. Being exposed to intensive advertisements, which inform customers of new goods whose appearance looks gorgeous and performance seems unparalleled; as well as create a trend for them to chase, it is difficult for viewers to resist the temptation of being fashionable and glamorous by purchasing the latest smart phone or lipsticks. Obviously, the old-fashioned things are dumped in the garbage can.

另一个原因是,人们拒绝穿同一件衣服或使用手机多年的原因是广告宣传的影响。暴露在密集的广告中,这些广告会让顾客了解到他们的外表看起来很漂亮,而且表现得无与伦比;除了为他们创造一种追逐的趋势,观众也很难通过购买最新的智能手机或口红来抵制时尚和迷人的诱惑。很明显,老式的东西会被扔进垃圾桶里。

Inevitably, this trend gives rise to several problems and the first one is environmental pollution. As a matter of fact, some waste such as electronic and plastic products can be hardly decomposed; worse still, in most cases, landfill is a common approach to dispose them, contaminating the soil and even the underground water. In addition, an unhealthy lifestyle may emerge. In an attempt to become fashion chasers, people especially the younger generation would waste a great deal of money and time on trying diverse commodities, being materially abundant but spiritually barren.

不可避免的是,这一趋势引发了一些问题,第一个问题是环境污染。事实上,一些废物,如电子和塑料制品,几乎不能分解;更糟糕的是,在大多数情况下,垃圾填埋场是一种处理它们的常见方法,污染了土壤甚至地下水。此外,可能会出现不健康的生活方式。为了成为时尚的追猎者,尤其是年轻一代,他们会浪费大量的金钱和时间去尝试各种各样的商品,物质丰富,但精神上却贫瘠。

In conclusion, considering detrimental effects of this phenomenon on both environment and individuals, people are discouraged from throwing away old things in daily life.

总之,考虑到这种现象对环境和个人的不利影响,人们不鼓励人们在日常生活中丢弃旧东西。

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