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雅思大作文7种写作误区实例解读 观点含蓄无人懂

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雅思写作中,观点的含蓄曲折,则是跟另一误区(观点表达过于武断绝对)遥相呼应的广大烤鸭最常见的问题之一,这也是我们中式作文的经典习惯。用一种螺旋式的,正话反说,铺陈的方式慢慢讲出你的你的真实观点,只可惜,这一套奇淫技巧在雅思写作中,是完全行不通的。要知道雅思写作,乃至西方学术写作,都是倡导简单明了,直入主题,开门见山是最基本的要义。

请看雅思写作误区实例:

①it seems arbitrary to assume that older generation’s traditional ideas are not the right way in the present age.

②First of all, international travel requires more than just money, People generate prejudice to(against) a place for their lack of knowledge about it

再跟笔者提供的表达进行比较

①older generations' ideas so often still have their place in a modern world。

②people may build prejudice against a place on their ignorance of it during an international travel.

雅思写作的观点句要求清晰明了,开门见山是最基本的要义,不要玩任何拐弯抹角的文字游戏。一位考官指出中国考生的作文,最致命的问题就是在导入段开始,一是表达自己观点不清不楚;二是话题都没有读懂,一动笔已偏题。这样的作文,开头寥寥几句读完,考官就给你定好了分数段了。

开门见山的表达如何实现,其实很简单,用主动句,用主谓宾句型就可以了。

附雅思考官写作的导入段欣赏:开门见山最佳范例

①People have different views about how much choice students should have with regard to what they can study at university. While some argue that it would be better for students to be forced into certain key subject areas, I believe that everyone should be able to study the course of their choice.

②It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidizing the industry.

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