经典：PETS二级写作之通关辅导-下(3)
4.组织语言
将短文要点组织成语言，这是构成短文的基础。以大纲题要点示范。
(1)When you enter the People’s Park,please walk along the road and cross the bridge.
(2)Turn right, walk a while and you will come to a hill. Walk around to the other side of the hill. See a lake.
(3)There’re trees beside the lake. We are going to have the picnic in the small woods.
5．将语言点组成句子
利用恰当的联接词将上述要点联成句子，再形成短文，在完成这一步前，考生须注意尽量用你最熟悉的词汇和句型，根据短文内容确定句子的主谓语，该采用的时态、语态，句子与句子之间的有机联系，段落与段落之间的过渡，尽量使句子表达清楚、正确，使短文具有一致性和连贯性。
6．通读全文，检查复核，确保字数不超过规定数，体裁正确，要点没有遗漏；语言表达准确又流畅，也无拼写、标点等小错误。
7. 参考范文：
Dear Peter，
We’re so glad you’re coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you con find us. We’ll have our picnic in the People’s Park. You know where that is, don’t you? After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight on till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right. After walking for a while you’ll come to a hill. Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic there in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
Li Hua
将短文要点组织成语言，这是构成短文的基础。以大纲题要点示范。
(1)When you enter the People’s Park,please walk along the road and cross the bridge.
(2)Turn right, walk a while and you will come to a hill. Walk around to the other side of the hill. See a lake.
(3)There’re trees beside the lake. We are going to have the picnic in the small woods.
5．将语言点组成句子
利用恰当的联接词将上述要点联成句子，再形成短文，在完成这一步前，考生须注意尽量用你最熟悉的词汇和句型，根据短文内容确定句子的主谓语，该采用的时态、语态，句子与句子之间的有机联系，段落与段落之间的过渡，尽量使句子表达清楚、正确，使短文具有一致性和连贯性。
6．通读全文，检查复核，确保字数不超过规定数，体裁正确，要点没有遗漏；语言表达准确又流畅，也无拼写、标点等小错误。
7. 参考范文：
Dear Peter，
We’re so glad you’re coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you con find us. We’ll have our picnic in the People’s Park. You know where that is, don’t you? After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight on till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right. After walking for a while you’ll come to a hill. Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you will see a lake. We’ll have our picnic there in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trouble finding us. Do come!
Li Hua
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