下午数学考试，你成绩不好，心情郁闷.下午几个好朋友邀你去操场打球
下午数学考试,你成绩不好,心情郁闷.下午几个好朋友邀你去操场打球,你们玩得很尽兴
下午数学考试,你成绩不好,心情郁闷.下午几个好朋友邀你去操场打球,你们玩得很尽兴.你用日记形式记录下你今天的活动感受.
日记包括以下几个要点:
1. 下午的数学考试你的成绩不佳,心情一直不好.
2. 下午同学邀你操场打球,解愁.
3. 大家玩得很高兴,而你开始一直当观众,你觉得你打不好,不敢上场.
4. 在大家的鼓励下,你终于上场打球并得分.
5. 现在你的心情舒畅了;更重要的是:你找回了自信(self-confidence).
6. 你在日记中对自己说了这样一句话:"…….".
注意:1. 词数100左右,开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2. 短文必须包含所有要点,但可以用不同的句式表达.要求结构合理,紧凑连贯.
Friday Dec. 23, 2005 Sunny
This afternoon I went to play basketball with some of my good friends. __________________
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Possible version:
Friday Dec. 23, 2005 Sunny
This afternoon I went to play basketball with some of my good friends happily.
At the very beginning, I didn't want to go playing basketball though my friends invited me to. I was (had been) in a bad mood the whole afternoon because I didn't do well in the math exam. With their comfort and encouragement, I went with them. However, I was just one of the audience. I dare not have a try because I was afraid that I couldn't play well. Encouraged by my good friends, I picked up the basketball and played with them. And luckily I got scores. I felt very excited.
Now I have become cheerful and above all I've regained self-confidence. I believe that the worst enemy in one's life is oneself. I shouldn't lose heart just because of one or two failures because I still have chances to try.
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